aw! SO CUTE! you gots ta update! U JUST GOTS TA! ^0^

omg awesome ! update as soon as you can!

sugar911

hey this is great i want more...more! >

i hope you didn't abandon this story. its really funny. please update!

Pretty good. Personalities are pretty dead on but you should type the Al Bhed phrases. Cuz i speak the language flulently. This is why my friends call me Rikku that and other reasons. But good story im bout to read the other chaps right now. Ciao.

curse you!
you made me say "aw" out loud!
anyway, considering you're new to , i'll give ya an itty-bitty critique
the only thing really wrong at all is the grammar - if you've got word, you might wanna switch on the grammar check, but don't pay too much attention to it (it does not believe you when you say a fragment can be a sentence...not that i..er, tell it that...or...you know, or nothing..)
you're really pretty good at this, and you've got my attention (i'm considerably picky) so congrats to you.
on that note, please please update soon!

Aw!

he was being so mean! But at least she got a hug! Now I want a hug. Anyway me luv this stuff.

That was actually kind of confusing? Were they mad, or were they all lovey dovey... what happened? I usually can figure out by reading it again, but... I don't understand! LOL. Good job writing, just... maybe you want to make the words a little more clear so that readers can have a better vision of what's going on?

ah love, what a beautiful thing...anyhoo,nice story-i'm really getting in to it and can't ait for the next chapter(that is if you write it) and if you do, keep up the excellent work!looking forward to reading Gip/Rikku first kiss!

Gippal was being such a jerk in this chapter. But it was really well writen, and seems to fall back into the mood you set during chapter 1. This fic is really good with descriptiveness and putting your characters into character.

This is a really good fic and you should definitely continue being a perfectionist, all the work you put into this is realy evident and it gets you into this mental mood where you can't stop reading.

If you couldn't tell already I am in LOVE with your fic, it's every thing I've ever wanted in a Rikku/Gippal fic. So basically what I'm saying is Don't blow it lol.

I don't see why you don't liek this chapter, it's actually pretty good. I'll admit I did like your first one better. The whole "Do you count?" and the pictuer things were hilarious. Any ways bring on those wonderful chapters youv'e been talking about

She likes him too ~_^ I can tell ^-^ these faces fun x_x *_*

Dude update! I love it! Great job!

Oh, this is getting good. JKJK. But really, good jobb!