Comet Moon 2008-07-13 . chapter 5Wow. It was two years
Worth it
Now down to four months (;
I love when you do your K/R fics and make them their equal/oppistes.
They rock
Oh. And knowing you, I imagine you need to be reminded that Dark Knight is coming out this Firday.
BOYAH
And a
BOYAH
For the story
Ja ne
Jim |
Adalbertus 2008-06-26 . chapter 5Rayne is Kim's mother, Shego is Kagan's daughter, Kim is a dhampire and all that put together in a really nicely written piece of fanfiction. Me like it :) On top of that Dracula was just reawakened and Drakken was changed by Shego. Oh this is going to be fun. And we have Monique who's most probably a Lycan (since she's not a vampire and lycans are well known for their healing abilities that could aid Ron in his condition at the moment) and Bonie is a witch :D
The only problem I see here is the time between updates, but I'm a patient man and blood sucking Kim is something worth waiting for.
And I want more Shego! The funny question is: if she could do what she did in ch4 why didn't she kill Kim before? Also did Rayne knew Shego is Shelia? She had to know how Shego looks like so it'd be really strange if she didn't recognise her. Anyway, Shego as a vampire has way to much potential to leave her like that. Adding vampire Drakken, spearing Kim(both during their fights and in the ch4), and now living ancient vampire lord I could think of a very elaborated plan for her to step up... but that's just me and I like Shego :P |
dex drako 2008-05-12 . chapter 5glad to see you posting again.
I love this story and you'r writing. |
The Mad shoe1 2008-04-27 . chapter 5Wow, this fic just ROCKED!
Can't wait for the next chapter. |
Mengsk 2008-04-17 . chapter 5Classic Cowboy updated? I thought he was dead!
I thought Ron was dead! |
Deathbrush 2008-04-13 . chapter 5Very cool story, as are many of yours. Happy to see some of them being picked up again with new chapters. Way to many good stories with many multi year cliff hangers, so can't wait to see more new chapters on old stories. Trust me, I know the temptation to play around with new story concepts, but there are a lot of people dying to find out what happens in a large number of your stories. |
Final-Fan 2008-04-10 . chapter 5 Glad to see this one chosen to be resurrected. |
Final-Fan 2008-04-10 . chapter 4 1. I'd forgotten that Shego's new origin contradicts her KP origin. How do you explain the Go Team, or, if you edit them out of the crossover universe, how do you explain Shego's plasma power? (I'm not too familiar with BloodRayne so if that universe has sufficient explanation for Shego's ability then never mind.)
2. Regarding Kim's "new look": did you REALLY have to? Seriously. Especially the leather and heels.
3. Regarding the scene at the end: damn. |
Final-Fan 2008-04-10 . chapter 3 "...if I was to go down, getting the mother of all hickeys from you would be my dream death.”
Awesome. Although I do wonder that Rayne hasn't altered fashion sense at ALL in the intervening years. |
Final-Fan 2008-04-10 . chapter 2 Ch. 1 - Halloween 1987 - James and Rayne meet
Ch. 2 - February 1987 - James and Rayne have been married for five years
I'm pretty sure there's a typo here somewhere . . . Ch. 1, at a guess.
By the way, nice "cameo" with the pregnancy test. |
zeo knight 2008-03-14 . chapter 5just goes tah show yah shoul;dnt really say that when yah mother has fangs
i love it |
FoxylilRaven 2008-03-11 . chapter 5lol i liked it...though becareful we dont want the big guys uptop to find the lemons and limes and kick you off the site... the morons dont realize parents watch their kids more then they think. |
satara 2008-03-11 . chapter 5 i, it,s so nice of you to finally update "in the blood" is one of my favorites fics of kim possible
well, keep writing like this.
your great. |
AZant 2008-03-10 . chapter 5Interesting story, I wonder how your going to go about this. I hope for monsters you'll put in a bit of the movie Van Helsing for monsters. You know the giant Werewolves and vampires true form. I personally think that movie was underrated, I just hope you don't use Underworld as a refrense not to that was a bad movie but the Werewolves just felt too fake to me. Also I hope you soon explain what happened to Ron earlier in CH 4 where he did some sort of change. I personally don't know anything about bloodrayne game so could you tell me if this change was in the game or something else. Update soon! |
warprince2000 2008-03-10 . chapter 5That was one of the best Chapters I have ever read, can't wait to see what happens next (update soon plz) |