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| Jayn 2008-08-30 ch 2, | abuseCute! I liked the setup and that you described it from both POVs. ^_^ |
| sayain girl 2006-05-03 ch 2, anon. | abusethis is the only gay couple that i like to read about. you did good. |
| happychica 2006-03-27 ch 2, | abuseSO COOL!! I think you should do another chapter. and swapping off character POV's is a cool idea. |
| Hated Angel with BrokenWing... 2006-02-22 ch 1, | abuseSo cute it would be nice if you contuined but its a cool ending! Cute! Great job! |
| Kodou Kikoeru 2006-01-20 ch 2, | abuseWell done. I personally appreciate the shortness of the story. |
| DC667 2005-12-26 ch 2, | abuseThat was cute. I guess I can't say Merry Christmas anymore. So have a happy new year! |
| inoku 2005-12-21 ch 1, | abuseaw that was so cute i loved it and fluff aw *rolls in the fluffines* lol i loved it so cute |
| Moth Gypsy 2005-12-17 ch 1, | abuseaw, how kawaii! i can see goten doing that to, chasing fireflys, like a little kid,lol! |
| stargabe 2005-10-27 ch 1, | abuseLOVED IT! Omgosh i had butterflies and everything! |
| chibikuro rose-sama 2005-07-22 ch 1, | abusethat was so cute and sweet. i loved it. |
| Mac8 2005-06-02 ch 1, | abuseAw, that was sweet. I like it! |
| Goku's Mistress 2005-05-13 ch 1, | abuseWow... Short... Very Very Short.. but effective. Nice! |