i like the plot but i was wondering if this was going to turn out to be a Sean/Emma or Jimmy/Emma?

Loved the second chapter just as much as the first! I can't wait for an update!

I'm about to head to the next part of this right now. I just wanted to say that I LOVE this idea! I'm very intrigued by it, and I just love your writing style. So glad I found your stuff. I'll definately be making my way through all of your work. :)

Keep up the GREAT work!

this is good pms

I LOVE it Jackie PLEASE more

I really hope you decide to continue this story. The pairing is really interesting and your writing is really good. Please update again!

wow...this story is good but jimmy isn't really thinking about ems feelings in this whole thing and thats not really like him considering he knows how it feels to get his heart broken...but this is a really good story ...keep on writing!

Amazing. Please ocntinue. It takes so long to find a good story. This one is amazing.

Since you have not left your email, I will write what I have to say on this form. I appreciate your review for my story. I really do. Thank you for real constructive criticism. Your help is appreciated but will not be needed, as I have realized my primary error was in writing that story, after the volume of hate mail i received. If i continue writing this story with a Catholic focus, it will not be fun for me anyways, because I don't know much about it. If it becomes un-fun, I will stop writing. SO I will change to story to be similar, but more in line with my own faith. i think it will suit Spike's preference for the avant garde better, anyways. Thank you again!
Oh,and good story.

Well seeing how I've read this fantasico story before I just wanted to let you knwo tat it's SO good that I had to review it again on LOL *points to pen name* you should know who this is =) I *loved* it though (even though jemma isn't really my couple) you're a GREAT writer with alot of talent! LOL you keep writing and I'll keep reviewing my jacky dah-ling *steals words*

haha I know we're not on db but *secretly hands you some muffins*

its a good story please update sooner

Heh. Jim and Em. Seriously, something about Eman scared me because Daniel Clark was the oldest cast member at the time and Miriam McDonald didn't look like she'd entered puberty at all until grade 10. And besides which, Emma had almost been raped by some net.perve in the pilot. The whole older man obsession is very unhealthy.

MORE!

please continue make jimmy and Emma go out for real and please.

update.I love it.