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| SailorSaturnthesilencer 2006-03-16 ch 1,  | abuseThat was really sad. I don't even like Yu Yu Hakusho straight pairings and you make me want to reconsider. ^-^ Nice story! |
| OrchDork18 2005-08-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow! I liked this a lot, it seemed almost poetic to me! |
| Lexi Teniro 2005-06-10 ch 1, | abuseT_T ... T_T ...Aww... |
| Ryuuie Mizishi 2005-06-07 ch 1, | abuseAww... :cries: That was so sd and sweet! I loved the whole thing, it was wonderfully descriptive and nearly made me cry. Yes, short and sweet is definitely the way to describe this ficcy! |
| Rose Angelz 2005-06-04 ch 1, | abuseaww...that was so sad! but still really good! write more! |
| Rowan and Sakura 2005-06-03 ch 1, | abuseRowan: A rare find among Zelia's works? Beautiful. Simply...it's so sad and reflective. Man...I don't know what to say, just that it's good. |
| kit-kit 2005-05-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseso sad keiko died. |
| Requiem of Silence 2005-05-13 ch 1, | abuseYou are the one-shot queen! So sad and sweet, the emotion was palpable. A sadness so thick I could eat it! *insert evil Ani Toguro laugh here* |
| SamiKismet 2005-05-13 ch 1, | abuseDefinitely short and sweet! The emotion was there and your transition from one idea to another was great! Good job!! |
| Silverchild of the winds 2005-05-13 ch 1, | abuseSweet. pleas write mor like ti. |
| MikaSamu 2005-05-12 ch 1, | abuseHauntingly well written. Thank you. |
| Aura Black Chan 2005-05-12 ch 1, | abuseOh, that was so good, and so sad! Yusuke's been around for centuries now, and probably everyone he loved is gone now. Maybe not Hiei, Kurama, and a few other's, but still, Keiko was his first friend! No wonder he went back to think about her, before his ruined former home became just another extention of Demon World. Great job! |
| every_heart_boa 2005-05-12 ch 1, anon. | abusewow. that was really good. excellent writing! |
| kurama-sweethart 2005-05-12 ch 1, | abuseAw! Fluffy goodness! And I'm absolutely loving the metaphorical meaning of the empty swing (even if you didn't intend it that way). Poor Yusuke. Imagine immortaility- something everyone craves. But I bet it has to be worse than death. |
| Ookami Youkai Ali 2005-05-12 ch 1, | abuseWow. That was beautiful. It's nice to know that there are authors out there who actually know what they are doing! I love the imagery and tone of this whole story. It was really vivid in my mind as I could see him reminiscing about the past. I liked it. ^_^ Very good job! *claps* |