 Fake Is the New Real 2007-07-12 . chapter 1*flails* Oh God. This is awesome. Just...AWESOME. |
 Marauding Newsies 2006-08-07 . chapter 1This is quite possibly one of the best stories I've read on here--and I've read some awesome ones. This was one of the first few I read when I was lurking, and it's STILL a fav...although I wish you'd write more stuff with Davey in it somewhere...*major pouts* Anyways, awesomely awesome awesomeness, and ta! ^_^ |
 Shadow 2005-11-21 . chapter 1 Damn man!
*hates you*
I'm so jealous. Your writing always sounds so reformed and mature and mine's such shite.
*invents a vacuum to steal your talent* |
 Shadowlands 2005-08-11 . chapter 1 Gah. I had a big long review all ready to go, but then it died.
“Just friends though, right?” Sean asks after a moment.
“Um, yeah. I guess."
The things they are referring to? Not something usually done by 'friends'. Nice try though guys.
"I’d rather play than watch?" [This is not true for everyone...]
"-the pants and the bats are just innuendoes in themselves."
"-getting to first base."
"Plenty of pitching and catching going on."
"-pretty boys in tight pants holding phallic symbols."
Ah ha. What a silly, dirty game. |
 Sprints 100 2005-06-10 . chapter 1I heart Sprace, and I heart this story.
Seriously. All the baseball jokes? Awesome. The action in the car? Awesome.
Everything was awesome.. Nice job.
Sprints |
 Strawberri Shake 2005-05-13 . chapter 1Yay SpRace fluff! Woot!
I love the way you do dialogue--just thought I'd mention that. *wishes I could do it half as well*
And yay for including baseball.
Heheh I did the same thing with the prompts my first secret slash--included all three without knowing I didn't have to.
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 DorkyColaGeek730 2005-05-13 . chapter 1Fantastic! Gotta love Spot and Race, they're so cute together ... And Spot with allergies? Adorable! I love the simplicity of their interactions in the car, too ... if that made sense. Ha and I'm not too proud to admit that I make the same sort of jokes during baseball games, heh heh. Awesome fic! |
 sosweet22 2005-05-13 . chapter 1great story so far. you have a good start. i hate allergies cause i got them now. its really cute. so keep on going and have a good one. ~Adri |
 Giggly Pancakes 2005-05-13 . chapter 1I love it. Sprace is my fav.
Cakes |
 Two-Bits 2005-05-12 . chapter 1-chuckles- I like this one. Only you should write a sequel: Prom Night: Second Base. Tony's mention of "bump and grind on the dance floor" seems VEERY promising. |
 BoomerRang 2005-05-12 . chapter 1 Aw...so cute!
Allergies suck. Rawr. But this story is so cute!
I've got to stop saying that sometime...
Okay, I give-THIS STORY IS SO CUTE!!
Much Love,
Boomer |
 antiIRONY 2005-05-12 . chapter 1Yay!! Another story!! I adore your Spot/Race fics. I really really do. Oh golly... *sigh* Yes, well. Again, thank-you for telling me about Blood Drips. Ive already watched it a million times. So, yes, you are quite awesome. good-bye. |