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Fake Is the New Real
2007-07-12 . chapter 1
*flails* Oh God. This is awesome. Just...AWESOME.
Marauding Newsies
2006-08-07 . chapter 1
This is quite possibly one of the best stories I've read on here--and I've read some awesome ones. This was one of the first few I read when I was lurking, and it's STILL a fav...although I wish you'd write more stuff with Davey in it somewhere...*major pouts* Anyways, awesomely awesome awesomeness, and ta! ^_^
Shadow
2005-11-21 . chapter 1
Damn man!

*hates you*

I'm so jealous. Your writing always sounds so reformed and mature and mine's such shite.

*invents a vacuum to steal your talent*
Shadowlands
2005-08-11 . chapter 1
Gah. I had a big long review all ready to go, but then it died.

“Just friends though, right?” Sean asks after a moment.

“Um, yeah. I guess."

The things they are referring to? Not something usually done by 'friends'. Nice try though guys.

"I’d rather play than watch?" [This is not true for everyone...]
"-the pants and the bats are just innuendoes in themselves."
"-getting to first base."
"Plenty of pitching and catching going on."
"-pretty boys in tight pants holding phallic symbols."

Ah ha. What a silly, dirty game.
Sprints 100
2005-06-10 . chapter 1
I heart Sprace, and I heart this story.
Seriously. All the baseball jokes? Awesome. The action in the car? Awesome.
Everything was awesome.. Nice job.

Sprints
Strawberri Shake
2005-05-13 . chapter 1
Yay SpRace fluff! Woot!

I love the way you do dialogue--just thought I'd mention that. *wishes I could do it half as well*

And yay for including baseball.

Heheh I did the same thing with the prompts my first secret slash--included all three without knowing I didn't have to.

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DorkyColaGeek730
2005-05-13 . chapter 1
Fantastic! Gotta love Spot and Race, they're so cute together ... And Spot with allergies? Adorable! I love the simplicity of their interactions in the car, too ... if that made sense. Ha and I'm not too proud to admit that I make the same sort of jokes during baseball games, heh heh. Awesome fic!
sosweet22
2005-05-13 . chapter 1
great story so far. you have a good start. i hate allergies cause i got them now. its really cute. so keep on going and have a good one. ~Adri
Giggly Pancakes
2005-05-13 . chapter 1
I love it. Sprace is my fav.

Cakes
Two-Bits
2005-05-12 . chapter 1
-chuckles- I like this one. Only you should write a sequel: Prom Night: Second Base. Tony's mention of "bump and grind on the dance floor" seems VEERY promising.
BoomerRang
2005-05-12 . chapter 1
Aw...so cute!

Allergies suck. Rawr. But this story is so cute!

I've got to stop saying that sometime...

Okay, I give-THIS STORY IS SO CUTE!!

Much Love,

Boomer
antiIRONY
2005-05-12 . chapter 1
Yay!! Another story!! I adore your Spot/Race fics. I really really do. Oh golly... *sigh* Yes, well. Again, thank-you for telling me about Blood Drips. Ive already watched it a million times. So, yes, you are quite awesome. good-bye.
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