Love it. The anticipation and worry just about killed them... and me. haha. But this was beautiful. I really liked this one. Great job on working with a great idea.

Sapphireswimming

...O.O...Damn you're evil! XD Just leaving it like that!I mean, does it...or doesn't...o.o;cliffhangers are evil, but this one is incredibly awesome!

So cute! I love Elricest!

Ah you ebil person! write more, I wanna know what hapens *dies* hehe, I like it alot - Awsome job.

amazing. Simply amazing.

Love how you mentioned Edward’s guilt too.

this is going in my favorites.

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I hate to say this but it was horribly confusing. Why did Ed have to do three transmutations?