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RainShadow2005 4/11/04 . chapter 1
Hi, I loved The Giver when I first read it. I’m just writing this review because very little people realize that The Giver is actually the first book in a trilogy (three books). The Giver is first, and then a book called Gathering Blue which actually doesn’t have Jonas in it. It’s about a whole other cast of characters, but the same place that the little boy in Gathering Blue disappears to in the end of the book is the same place Jonas and Gabe went to in the end of The Giver. The third and last book is called Messenger and it has the main characters from both the previous books and finally gives the ending that readers felt they weren’t given at the end of the Giver. If you want to know what happened after The Giver ended, you should read the rest of the trilogy: The Giver, Gathering Blue (different people), and Messenger (not told from Jonas’s POV, but it has him in it).
RainShadow2005
jitterbug204 10/25/02 . chapter 2
Very good, can't wait for the next chapter.
Allison 3/16/02 . chapter 1
IF YOU WANT THE NEW CHAPTERS E-MAIL ME!
Allison 10/9/01 . chapter 1
Feel free to e-mail me!
CrystalxxDreams 9/12/01 . chapter 2
MORE!
Allison 7/15/01 . chapter 1
Thank you all for being so nice! Ji Toniz Hi Mike ( I know it's you by your name.. dead give away) I am sorry that i have not been uploading my chapters but my computer has gone nuts! Thank you again and if you keep reading I will always keep writting!
pkchampion 5/25/01 . chapter 2
Hi, I'm Toni's friend in middle school. I like the story. You should add more.
Leothenite 5/23/01 . chapter 2
GO ALLIE! Awesome story, by the way. Ur so on my fav author's list. By the way, this is Toni AKA sparkplug13 or uglyfish21:)
Jami-chan 5/12/01 . chapter 2
please continue! please please please? and quickly? this story is great so far, but the chapters could be a lil longer...but thats up to you not me
Allison 4/10/01 . chapter 1
Hey all I glad that you liked my story and I am sorry about the Grammer and such. I am only twelve though, I am very very glad again that you have read it and to the person who left the name spot Blank so that it read Blank if you read my story again you will see that Fiona was watching the Giver from where the Elders do, whereever that may be. I don'y know if I made that up or not... I can't remember. But any way if you like you can email your thoughts to me at thanks a lot. I am glad that I have had the chance to promote my writting to my fellow Giver fans!
CerulianQueen 4/8/01 . chapter 2
hey. i loved the giver. one of my favorite novels. i think your what if story kindof ruins it. i mean, no great writing style that you have there. you could elaborate more and use proper grammar.
Blank 3/28/01 . chapter 2
Ooooooooh! Clifhagers! wright more. One thing, how could she spy on them in the sealed off room?
PrincezzShortie 3/28/01 . chapter 2
ffffffffffff
Allison author 3/27/01 . chapter 1
PEOPLE I AM SORRY BUT THIS ISN'T FINISHED! PLEASE READ THE OTHER CHAPTERS SOON TO COME!
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