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Hocapontas
2009-11-16 . chapter 12
Wow!! That was totally awesome!! I can't wait to find out what happens next! I would call this a 3x ultimate favorite. Only the 4th one to be that good! I think I would like it to be Harry/Yuna but it doesn't really matter to me. When is Harry going to transform into his Animagus form? Also I'm looking forward to the next meeting between the Flamel's and Harry. I'm worried about Harry and those foreign emotions. Is it somehow the other Harry's emotions breaking through? Why are they suddenly appearing? Is it from getting the memories of the other Harry? If so why did it take so long to happen? I'm anxious to find out what is going to be different with the chamber of secrets. Are you going to leave Dobby in the story or take him out of it? I'm REALLY ANXIOUS for the next chapter! And can you please put Remus in your story more?
Lord Damon Shadowmage
2009-11-15 . chapter 1
Can I adopt your story/continue it?

I will be using some elements while others will be my own!

regards
meow114
2009-11-05 . chapter 12
nice i hope you update asap. Harry & Yuna pairing FTW XD
Soki711
2009-11-03 . chapter 12
This is one of the best stories I have read and I hope you can incorporate my favourite little Slytherin Daphne Greengrass. She is so different from the other girls and her boldness, beauty and sophistication would be a boon to this Harry Potter story. Best Regards Kyoshi
i love U regardless of who U r
2009-10-27 . chapter 12
Love it!
jonez227
2009-10-27 . chapter 12
AH! NO this can't be it. there must be an error. it's not right. it's not right. it's not right. please tell me that there will be more. i might just cry if this never gets finished.



Jone-Z
Zefrn
2009-10-22 . chapter 12
No more updates?!?!?! Come on... just when the story was getting really good. I love Harry/Ginny and would love you to continue in this story and relationship. Please update soon, though it has been several years and I am not holding my breath.
BlackRose-FlowerofDeath
2009-10-17 . chapter 12
Well snap!! Can't wait for the next chappie!!

BlackRose
LilithL2
2009-10-15 . chapter 12
I love your story, it's a shame that you don't have time anymore and you can't continue this wounderfoul plot. I love the two Lily's relationship with Harry. Congratulations.

On the other hand, I have to say that I read your Profile. I understand all opinions but you don't have to be soo hurtfull and hatefull againts other opinions/believes/ways of seeing life and love.

I agree with you that Fanfiction could have a distintion with slash fanfiction, it wouldn't be difficult. But you can choose who you want to be the protagonist, you could choose who is his/her parner too if you wish. You could choose another kind of "Rated" fanfic, because most of the slash fanfictions are "M" by definition.

So I really think your Profile is full of hate and it's a shame you have this kind of believes soo racist.

Sorry for my english, but I'm spanish.
At least you are a good writer. Congratulations.
Florian's Rewiew
2009-09-29 . chapter 12
Hi you, really nice story to now.
I wonder what you have ideas in backup.
May I contribute my first ideas in the hope they help you going forward.

1) Harry may expose his overpowered supressor-orb at Azkaban. So he may have a few words with his shadow army. Surely Harry must order them not to reveal anything they saw when Harry releases his powers that are beyond everybodies believe in this AU.

2) I wonder how you go to the second year. Does Harry steal the diary? Does Ginny fall for Riddle this year and opens the chamber?
Does Harry decides to control the basilisk before Riddle comes out of the diary? Will Ginny be angry to Harry because of Yuna and because Harry steals the diary? How do you wanna get rid of Lockhart, when Ginny isn't possessed by the diary?

3) I hope your doing well. Goodbye.
jirya
2009-09-27 . chapter 12
you seriously either need to note the story as discontinued or update
Amaterasu77
2009-09-08 . chapter 5
Sephiroth Jenova?
Final Fantasy Reference much? Sauron would be LOTR...
Nice story so far. :D
ShadowRyan
2009-09-08 . chapter 12
Great story. I'm hoping for an update maybe? I know it's a long shot but please!? I wanna know more! lol Anyways good job on your stories I want more. lol
azphxbrd
2009-09-07 . chapter 9
I have enjoyed reading older stories.Your old question about the sorting is as followed:

Hufflepuff:
Abbott,Bones,Finch-Fltchley,MacMillan E ; 4+

Ravenclaw :
Boot,Brocklehurst,Moon L,Patil P,Perks S A,Turpin L ; 6+

Gyrffindor:
Brown L,Finnigan S.,Granger H,Lomgbottom N,Patil P,Potter H,Thomas D,Weasley R : 8

Slytherin:
Bulstrode M,Goyle G,Malfoy D,Nott T,Parkinson P,Zambibi B,Greengrass D,Crabbe V ; 8+

Total : 26+ more likely 36 to 40 students.
katamarigrl
2009-09-01 . chapter 5
I like your story very much. I think there are some things that you should be careful of though. Sometimes I think you sway slightly on the side of cheesy. Other students are too in awe of Harry sometimes, like when he blasted Malfoy across the hallway and the half-bloods and muggle-borns all clapped. That reaction is weird to put with eleven-year-olds who would more likely be just high-fiving and cheering on Harry. Also, you have used the phrase, 'if this were an anime' and something along the lines of 'anime style feinting.' Let me be the first to assure you that this is actually not an anime. Therefore to break the flow of the story like that is really awkward. It actually borders on a bit obnoxious and immature. I really like the plot and I would love for you to complete it. Also, spelling and grammar are not appalling but you could use some help.
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