Intersting. Look forward to reading more soon!

please update

Oh God I love this. I can't believe I missed this story till today.

Only 4 reviews? I am really enjoying this story (though I could live without the Grissom/Sara stuff) and can't wait to read more!

Wow, this is a great story. It's not often you see a fic centered mostly around the case and they are almost never writen this well. Keep up the good work.

oh. getting crepy and god.

Very interesting story and good dialogs. I especially like the way you built up the story like a real epsiode with a teaser and a punchline, I almost expected to hear Pete Townsend's "Who Are You" after Grissom's statement "Smoking kills". I also think it's refreshing to finally read from an author who doesn't hate Sophia. After all, she defended Grissom against Ecklie in "Mea Culpa", it would have been easy for her to charge Grissom so he would be demoted and she could take his place as supervisor but she stuck to the truth and got demoted instead. Good work, I'm looking forward for the rest.

Hey! This is great. I like the way your characters work together, very smooth transitions and nice tension / relationships. I'm also enjoying to go-easy on Sophia (unless there is a motive there heheh) I'm a bit pinged i can't read your post-comitd fic (I'm in Aussie and we aren't up to that ep yet, don't wann spoil it now do I?) But I'm really enjoying this, you better update son! Thanks!