This story is adorable. Beautiful plot, could use a little more description but I'm really thinking it's better simple and sweet. So adorable. I enjoyed reading, thank you for posting!

that was a great story you've got! i really love it! when the first time i read it, it really touches your heart. you can feel the presence of love in there. sure this is a good story. i hope you'll write another one

Aw. That is so sweet!^_^

Kiya! So kiwaii! ^-^

...Only a few spelling errors, but I thought that the story was quite cute. Update 'Muerte Carcel' sometime...please?

~Sayonara~

Aw that's SO cute! ^_^ *cuddles kitty stuffed animal*