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| Teddy.in.a.nutshell 2008-06-26 ch 6,  | abuse“I keep forgetting you a seeker. Next time, I’ll throw fire. Let’s see if you can catch that.” l l --> absolutely hysterical!! oh my goodness! :) |
| ARtemIs07 2008-05-24 ch 7, | abuseit's been what two years... please update sOOn... this is so cute... |
| Your Unknown Friend 2008-04-09 ch 1, | abusetotally loving the relationship that harry and Hermione have. omg love the whole Dudley situation. UPDATE! |
| SwishAndFlick31 2007-04-12 ch 7, | abuseEllo, I probably reviewed earlier, but whatever. I'd be glad to beta for you. Just send me a PM or something Update Soon!! SwishAndFlick31 |
| Readerforlife 2007-01-03 ch 7, | abusehaha...funny short chapter! can't wait for more |
| Salamon2 2006-09-02 ch 7, | abuseI am sorry, but Americanizing Harry and Hermione, just isn't working for me. It's crossing the line too much. This story was a cute oneshot at best, in my opinion. And the first chapter wasn't so badly out of character, nor too cheesey. However it's turned into the fic that won't die. It would've been fine had it been a one shot, but no this continuation of it ruined it for me. An Americanized Mellenium Harry and Hermione are not who the characters really are. You made Vernon a little bit soft hearted, when in reality he's far from it (unless it's Marge, Petunia, or Dudley). You made Petunia too nosy, yes she's the neighborhood snoop, but she doesn't consider Harry's life worth snooping about. Dudley would never ask Harry for advice on anything. He'd take his own interpretation on things and not seek anyone else's opinion on the matter. Don't even get me started on Hermione's parents. As I've said before, if you ended the story with the first chapter, it would be fine and a cute and fluffy story that wasn't too badly written, nor horribly out of character. However, the more you added to it, the worse you've made it. ~Salamon2 |
| Jez138 2006-09-01 ch 1, | abuseLove it so far. You're doing a great job. Hope to see an update sometime soon. :) |
| JessMess 2006-08-30 ch 7, | abusethat was really fantastic. i am so looking forwad to more. haha dudders is so stupid. BYE |
| annependragon 2006-08-30 ch 7, | abuseOMGG! of at firs this was just cute and fluffy but NOw especially after the date setup thing and all and that finally line, I can't wait to see what happens next. Didn't think Dudders was that dense but Oh this should be interesting indeed. |
| alayneni 2006-08-30 ch 7, | abuseGreat story. But why on earth is Harry putting ideas of procreation in Dudley's mind! He knows if Dudley tries to do anything inappropriate with her, he will freak. |
| lyssalovie 2006-08-30 ch 6, | abuseHI! please update soon! If you still need a beta, i can do it for u. just please update soon! |
| Alexandra Warkel 2006-08-30 ch 7, | abuseThis is an awesome story! I was so excited to see that you had updated. And if you still need one, I will be your beta. I mean, not that you need one. There are only a few punctuations that need to be corrected, otherwise you are doing great by yourself! Update Soon! Alex |
| Talon05 2006-08-29 ch 7, | abuseIf it'll mean more story then I'll beta for christ sakes |
| jolly-for-heart07 2006-08-29 ch 7, | abuseyes it is short but i LUV it...from the beinning update soon |
| Chaotic Darknex 2006-08-29 ch 7, | abuseyuk dudley and Hermione? gross. sick. wrong. can you make harry and hermione get together soon? please. hermione and dudley together is so wrong on so many concepts i'm not gonna say them. ugh *shudders*. hope you update soon. |