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bloomsburry
2009-07-28 . chapter 1
aw so cute!
Kohaku Lynn-Cyrcus Fraek-76767
2008-12-17 . chapter 1
Awesome. I was sitting down when I read the part where Rin screamed and - I'm sorry I can't stop laughing about it! Give me a few minutes.

Ok, I got it out of my system. Great job, wait... If Sesshomaru is her father and Kagome is her mother then they hooked up and had a half-breed baby named Rin... Weird.
Shadowsabre
2008-10-20 . chapter 1
man i love your stories they can always make me laugh no matter how miserable i am...
Hannahmgp
2008-02-29 . chapter 1
WAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHA! THAT WAS HILARIOUS! Try and morph the stories a little more! My favorite parts are:
“GET THE ** OFF MY DAUGHTER!”
Sesshomaru paused and looked down at Rin. “Do you know what that word means?”
“Um, no?”
“Good. Forget it entirely.”
“Ok.”
∆The door opened, revealing the old woman of the village, Kaede, holding a rolling pin. She caught the demon by surprise and she hit him over the head repeatedly. “GET AWAY FROM MY HOUSE!”
“OW—STOP IT—OUCH!” Inu-Yasha backed away, trying to flee from her weapon
“DON’T MAKE ME HAVE TO GET THE VACUUM!” Kaede shouted angrily, switching to the broom that was leaning against her house. The rolling pin cracked in two after the first couple hits.
“OW—you know what, dammit, I’M JUST GONNA EAT YOU NOW!” Inu-Yasha shouted angrily.
And just like that, he ate her whole.
HAHAHAHAHAHA! So funny! Keep on going! YAH MAN! (Everyone goes insane, if they weren't already)
TheEvilerTwin
2008-01-04 . chapter 1
okay... weird
Sora Sotara
2007-03-03 . chapter 1
Love the story dear, and can't wait to hear more. I hope your muse doesn't die before then...^-^
yllom21
2006-12-24 . chapter 1
Yeah, really wierd. Amusing though, nice job.
MattsyKun The Inu Hanyou
2006-11-20 . chapter 1
srry can't log in right now about to leave school

LOLZ! I LOVED THIS! WHOOT! do... uh... the grim brother's version... (grins evilly)
Eryn Goddess of Chaos
2006-08-24 . chapter 1
I finally got to reading this story and it was funny! Lol. Inuyasha as a cross dresser, I love it. Do another one if you can come up with some really good ideas.
bookworm0492
2006-08-20 . chapter 1
YATTA! KAWAII! update soon please! I like this stpry! LOL
FoxLuvr
2006-06-12 . chapter 1
Absolutely wonderful! PPLEEASE update! I loved reading this fic. And, even though you said Just Once and Again Please would be down for a while, I really hope that you can get them up soon. Those two and Inside My Mind are three are some of the top of my favorite ten list! :)
Dawnella
2006-04-10 . chapter 1
Oh, hey, I like this. I really hope you're continuing it, because I like these kinds of rewritten fairy tales...and if they've sort of been edited, then it's even better! And I know you're still writing and have two stories to work on (yes, I've read them, they're good...I was just too lazy to review...^^;), but just a small 10 word chapter about Cinderella would be nice. :)
Jade elf
2006-03-22 . chapter 1
CUTE I love it. I love the fact that you have some nice fauther/daughter bonding between sesshie and rin. You must write more to this story *whips out evil pointer of doom* or I will point at you with my pointer.. of ... doom? or not, please just write.
Cricket
2006-01-02 . chapter 1
Well THAT was fun!

Too bad you haven't updated (and at this point it doesn't look like you plan to-ever), 'cause I'm left wanting more.

Oh well. It's still funny.
PinkRibbon25
2005-10-22 . chapter 1
OMG LOL PLEASE UPDATE!
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