please continue I really liked it.

Good story but it's kind of a copy of when Kalulu came.

I really like this story! It has the elements of the tense battles and all the drama and humor of Zatch Bell. I really hope that you keep on writing and if you need a beta to check over spelling and grammer I'd be happy to! Anyways please keep on writing because I'd love to read more!

DUDE this is awesome! Madam you are a farkin' genius! Please update soon, the suspense... it kills... XP

THIS IS AN AWESOME STORY! PLEASE CONTINUE IT! XD The greatest story of Zatch Bell I've read on this site!

This was honestly a story that I loved reading, the second chapter just dug into me and shook me. One thing that bugged me was how you called the teacher a pervert without showing that he actually earned the title, you're leading the reader to assume something but giving no proof and it bugged me a bit. *shrugs* that's just me. The other thing that snagged my attention was the historical rant, and that got me in a good way. So many people shy away from Pearl Harbour and everything back in the early turn of the century so it was refreshing. I'm adding you to my Fav Authors ^_~

Hey Sirius, This was very good! You're a great writer by the way!:) You couldn't have picked a better ending for it, and I must say it fit the story extremely well! If I was only half as good, I might have my story up by now!;)

Hi! This is pyro the dark angel. I got a new name thingy. As for the prize...CAN I HAVE HIEI!? XP haha. Anyway, I am so glad you updated! Also, if you like Chrno Crusade, then pleaze check out my story. Its called "Lover's Last Kiss" I would like to know what ya think of it! ^_^ That's IF you like that anime/manga. By the way, if you wanna read a REALLY good manga, get Chrono Crusade. It's got action, a lil but of romance, but it also has its sad moments too. But I still recommend it. Oh and my CC(Chrno Crusade) story is under my pyro name. I can't wait to read the next chapter! XD

~*Shadow*~

This is a... good ending (I guess).
Doesn't feel like a dramatic Zatch Bell style oh-no-a-mamodo-that-was-good-dies-and-there-was-a-touchy-sadness-scene-after-the-mamodo-was-defeated thing going on, but still good.
The only reason I made the random Mamodos in GTRB (GET THAT RED BOOK!) just be tied up was because I was too lazy to acutally think of a touchy scene between bookkeeper and mamodo. Plus, it wouldn't be funny and I was lazy. I hope you weren't turning lazy.-_^
Anyway, this was a great fan fiction, even though it only lasted about six chapters. Mine (on the other hand) is good for about twenty ^_^
Anyway, it was a privalege to read your fan fiction

Who knows, I might actually use Kane and Kata for my fan fiction (minor spoiler for my own fan fiction)

~Electric Ammo
Author of Storms

PS: When I actaully plan on using Kane and Kata, I'll e-mail you for permission, ok? ^_^

It was a good ending and yar right. 'Bout HP in fact I just got finished typing an email to my friend talking about how good HP is when thinking up ideas 'cause there's so much to think about.

Back to subject, adding more to this story would most likely ruin it so it is good where it is. Great job and I hope to read more form you sooner or later.

goodness! you rock~

Perhaps you are right. (sighs) It was fun while it lasted.

Well you write more stories like this? I just read it and it over, but i love this story!

I love it! Update really soon!

update soon please! ^__^