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Virtual Dreams
2009-08-10 . chapter 1
Hehehe, I can really see Gon doing this as a Hunter exam... that, or a rock-paper-scissors tournament XD

I really liked this story. Are you continuing this? I hope you do <3

PS: It would have been funny to see Gon smash the smartass's face or make a huge crater on the ground just to see their reactions... XD
Spirit-Release
2008-06-21 . chapter 1
I think the theme of Hide and Go Seek perfectly matches Gon's personalities >_<

However, I also do think that for as far as taking pictures go, the other participants should be able to steal other's cameras, and/or that Gon and Killua be able to try and get the cameras of anyone who took their picture, because it would make the game a little more interesting, fun and dangerous

Anyways, I
Dark
2007-09-18 . chapter 1
this story rocks!a very possible chapter in the hunter x hunter story
Scarlet Amaranth
2007-05-14 . chapter 1
Is this ficcy abandoned? I hope not... I wish you could update ^o^
kawaii-kirei
2007-05-09 . chapter 1
i know this review is two years late, but i just can't NOT review. x3 reading just this, i am now ready to ask for your hand in marriage. this is just so unique and well-written with the seriousness and the humor mixed perfectly with each other that i was left speechless when i finished reading it. of course, the fact that this is kirugon gives plus points. x3 and i hope there are more fics out there where the two of them are depicted as examiners, but woe is me. D:

"Kurapica can't afford to be human" - this line struck me the most. I don't know why, maybe it's because that even though he's my favorite character, it's believable that Kurapica really can't afford to be human.

and the fact that the exam is "Hide and Go Seek" makes me love you even more because it's genius. simply genius.

x3 i'm sorry, i'm still squealing over this. it's been so long since i've last read something like this! this is such a worthwhile read. :D i thank you so much for writing this!
Silver Bleak
2006-12-27 . chapter 1
why?! why won't you update?!
redgrrl
2006-11-10 . chapter 1
wow...
i think you've just about written EXACTLY what I've been hoping to read for - Gon and Killua as examiners, after the Greed Island arc.
I loved the characterization - you've kept both of them in character perfectly
Please update soon. ^^
YetAnotherCatgirl
2006-04-06 . chapter 1
Cute!

I like the characterization, and the stare of honest DOOM.
Because that's what it is, really.

I didn't know you wrote HxH, but you do a good job of it!
therhoda
2005-11-27 . chapter 1
I really liked this. The characterization of them as older but still them. Together still after time is a great thing. I felt a pang when Kurapica is mentioned with the loss of all that he was to his revenge. I was hoping for more of this, just to see how hide and seek plays out.
sheerWonder
2005-08-27 . chapter 1
continuecontinuecontinuecontinuecontinuecontinuecontinuecontinuecontinuecontinuecontinuecontinue!

it's great!
Tery
2005-07-19 . chapter 1
oh please update. just update. update.i wonder wat u will write next. this is so cool.since they r exminers.
Funlvr
2005-07-15 . chapter 1
i really like your story. i can't wait for the next chapter. i wonder if you will let anyone pass. oh well. keep it up. Your doing great.
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2005-07-06 . chapter 1
great. Interesting. I just simply love this fic. I jope you update.
Death Bo
2005-07-05 . chapter 1
I realy hope that you will make another story. it will be great because they are examiners.
firedraygon
2005-07-01 . chapter 1
Hide and seek! I haven't played that game in ages. Hee hee, this is such a fun fic. I love the idea. ^^ Please write more soon!

~firedraygon97
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