Remarkably well done. There were a few typos, and your language seemed rather stilted at times, but those will be healed in time, by practice. You stayed true to characters, and I would love to see development on this unique story

Can't wait for the next chapters...

Great story for a uncommon subject

Very good. Update quickly, and this will be a very good story.

Your writing style is v. good! Keep it up! I'm looking forward to the next chapter/s.

Cool! Don't leave me hanging now so update asap! I might make a Seventh Tower Fic. But anyway, update quickly!