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| rika-sensei 2006-12-23 ch 3, anon. | abuseaww!! *_* how sweet! me thinking- *now... if only someone would make something a little more... intense... XD |
| Angel 2006-01-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseHi. I'm sorry, but that's never gonna happen! |
| kohakuhikari 2005-12-18 ch 3, anon. | abuseHello! ^_^ I've never read any Fruits Basket fanfic (even though it's a favorite) and I've got to say that I really enjoyed this one! Your a great writer, in fact I'm going to have to read more of your fanfics! ^_^ kohakuhikari (the other half, my profile will be up soon$_$) |
| kayla 2005-11-12 ch 3, anon. | abuseTHIS WAS UNREAL. shi chaN would never express his fellings in that manner. he would lie and watche her suffer. he is a sexy conniving sadistic bastard inu. |
| KAYLA 2005-11-12 ch 2, anon. | abuseACK! |
| happiness theory 2005-08-19 ch 3,  | abusecool. it was a kewl fic |
| RLBB 2005-08-16 ch 3, | abuseaww...sweet and funny ^_^ |
| Darth Luke Skywalker 2005-08-14 ch 3, | abuseAwe, cute ending. I enjoyed it, so good job! =D -ssjprincesscat |
| fightingcomet 2005-08-14 ch 3, | abuseaw...how sweet! ^_^ i loved when Michan said "Shigure, how can you write your manuscripts if you're a dog?!" haha, good fic! ^^ |
| RLBB 2005-07-08 ch 2, | abuseHey, nice story so far...Me and my friend really luv the pairing. But u have 2 update soon ok? K ^_^ |
| just me 2005-06-14 ch 2, anon. | abusewow awe some it's great keep it up |
| Soul Raider 116 2005-06-03 ch 2, | abuseHm...again, interesting. I think it's moving way to fast though. And like I said, the stucture bugs me. Just a few comments. 1) Longer Paragraphs 2) Choppy flow. It just doesn't flow right, and I think it's too much he said she said, not enough description. 3) When a new character speaks you have to start a new paragraph, it's confusing if you don't. Other than that, just a few minor gramatical and characterization issues, but it still has some promise, so I'll keep reading. |
| Soul Raider 116 2005-06-03 ch 1, | abuseInteresting. I think you're writing style could use some improvement, and the chapters should be longer. Your flashback confused me a little. But It's so hard to find a good MiixShii story, and the plot seems good. |
| doggythumper 2005-06-03 ch 2, | abuseaw. that so cute. hurry and make more, kay? |
| Akina Hasegawa 2005-06-03 ch 2, anon. | abuseShigure: ah! I knew it! Mitchan, I love you too! Mitchan: What?! Really?! Oh my...This is...so sudden...*stnds up* I'm sorry...I'll have to think this over... Shigure: HAHH?? But I thought you loved me!! ToT XD LOL sorry, sorry. It was just so sudden, they way she said, "I LOVE YOU!!" waiting for next chapter. ^^ |