nice story is this the last chapter it says its not finished yet

Ok, I know this isn't a review but since my old yahoo e-mail that I had got deleted this is the only way to contact you. Don't you have hotmail or something? Well about the deal I'm pretty bad at it. But I'll try especially since tomorrow I'm going on a vacation and I wont have time then. Later

Hey there. Well I'm back! I think I should change my name and put ghost or something like, I think it will suit me. Well great chapter, and it was about time those two got together. I think I remember that you put this scene in you other story when Van or Fiona was remembering. Great chapter and now let all the romance begin!

What the I didn't get the alert until now? Great chapter by the way, hope to see more soon!

great chapter. hope to read more from you l8r

Wow. He lives! And anywhom. That was a lovely chapter. Damn Seth to hell. Yay Van and Fiona getting together. Woot.

YOU ROCK PLEASE WRITE MORE!

write more please I love it

another story not updated for a while but it s ur u do wat u want lol

Very Interesting... Hurry up with the story please :) It's just really good and i'm sure all us readers want to keep on reading. (p.s wheres Raven? hehe he could add a little more trouble for Van right now.. I feel sorry for Van)

Wow, that sure was interesting, a guy whose not a jerk, I get a feeling he has a bad side ^_^' Great work, update soon!

AW! poor Van. At least Seth wasn't a total jerk like the others. But how long will that last? You did a good job on this chapter. Make Seth and Fiona not go out and then make Van be non-cowardly. Can't wait for more.

wow this fic is so great!! it is really killing me waiting for you to update so plz update soon :D

Woah nice fic!, really love how the story is set, really Good, hope to see you update soon, its starting to kill me already just to wait for it! ^_^

This is a good fic :) You do a good job on portraying the characters accurately and setting the mood. You might want to use a thesaurus for the words that are a little repetitive (i.e. young woman). Overall, this is nicely done.