its cool ^_^ and konosetsu whoot ^_^ make more

I really liked this. Nodoka+negi pair=WINZ!
You watch the show allot? J/w cause you seem to know every characters personality.
Heres a tip if you want to use less characters. Remember who hangs out with who and you can sort of group them.
Like The Librarian Group, and the cheerleaders. Just an idea saves me time so I can focus on the stories. But good description. This seems like a script for the Anime. keep it up
- Jude
p.s

Wow! Is this long! I like the concept and I was actually going to write something like this but be more kid friendly. Anyway, I'll favorite this since we seem to both have the same idea.

this was a great fic, update soon!
And please put in more Konoka and Setsuna moments they are o cute together ;D

Why haven't you updated? I'm really liking this fic

Not bad, though a little slow. Certainly should be continued.

this seems like a sweet story hope ya update soon and put more konoka setsuna in

REALLY GOOD! Update soon!!

if this was a bad chapter than bush didnt rig the elections in florida. that means this is like the best fanfic ever!! please continue even though the season is over it is nice to have some quality writers on

i m now the king

this is good plz continue it

ya, could...um the select few be...um...ah...oh ya could

they be Setuna and...um...oh ya...and Konoka!

Good story, dude (Even though I don't know your gender, I still shall call you dude). For some reason, this gave me a fuzzy feeling in my heart and colon.

This is a good start. I like it very much. I hope things will go well in your next chapters.

Not bad. True that trying to fit everyone in the chapter made for weak character development, but the entire premise is cute. Ah, if only the spotlight had fallen more on Nodoka-chan...

(spotlight promptly falls on my head)

Ow.

Good one.

OMG, this was so good Okashira-san!! I jus love it!! Write more!