Wow, I love the provocative language and how well you wrote the pairing. Greating ending, too. I'll be adding this to my favorites. :)

...i don't know what to say...

That's sad. That was beautiful.

I usually hate Sputen but I guess only with Shippo. I like these two. I like how you made them the same just older. Even Kanna has shown a little emotion in the anime... I wonder if she missed Naraku?

Chalk up my lateness in reviewing to nervousness that I might say the wrong thing. I think this is one of my favorite fanfics. I raved about it for a while, and meant to nom you at IYFG, but missed my chance... it's a shame, you deserve recognition for this. I even started some fanart, but it was woefully unworthy.

Thank you for posting this here. It's now easier for me to find and rec.

It's really amazing what you did with two minor characters here. Usually one would read something about them and think they were OC-ish, but it's wonderfully *them*, while at the same time building on that and making it interesting.

How can it be that I'm the first to leave a review for this? It's utterly wonderful. I love what you've done with Souten, how you've written Kanna, just mnm, all of it. Great stuff.