Great story. Keep up the good work . Please update soon.

NO NOT THE END ! you need to write more like what if Luke like hunts him down or something and then have him beat the crap out of the guy and have the guy press charges and have like a whole court case or something like that

That was so sad. I loved it (Wow, that makes me sad mean. Taking pleasure from there pain.) I was really well written and I am gonna check out your other story you mentioned at the end to. Hope you write more stories soon, this was great. Oh and I thought your inserted comment "(and neither do you yet he he)" was funny and really made me want to know what happened, though I kinda guessed. Anyway good writing keep it up.

very good story, you made me cry!

I think it's great! So touching

Wow. This was a great story. Can't wait for the new one.

Great job! You did relaly good with the emotions!

This is a very good story, and very sad too. I hope you keep writing cause it has a lot of potential... or maybe you could write a sequel, just a thought. Peace :)

OMG, that was so sad I had tears in my eyes in the end. But I was wondering if there's gonna be another chapter or if this is the end?

This was a really good story and well written :D

disturbing but good

That was good.

I love angst and drama and that my friend was both.

Kudos!

Rusty

Wow, very well written, so sad but so well written. He cried with her, and that's what he would have done! Great job here!

This was very good. It was sad, but good. I like your writing very much and Yes, I already read These eyes. ;-) Also very good.