Beautiful.

Short and bittersweet..I like it. You did a great job on Pip's character. One of the best fanfics I've read in a while.

Whoo! I like this one - short and sweet(well, by my standards anyway). I love the way you paint the characters involved.

Wow. I love this. You capture the emotions perfect, and you write Pip into this situation perfectly. It feels like he's been there a lot of times before. I love it. Great job!!

pl write more to this story it has a good begining i think plz update

What a nice concept. Lovely short little character study. I like it.

~Cendrillo

Wow... I really love it, although it makes me sad.