Very good. Erik's got a point about the whole Jesus making the ugly beautiful thing. God, I feel sorry for him and I hate the fop and Christine. But good one-shot.

:'( Very realistic but very, very sad. He made a good point, but shh, I'm not supposed to say that. Anyway, this was great, as cynical and depressing as it may have been. It was an enjoyable read.

You almost made me cry...This was fantastic! Very nice piece!

E.M

I like it. So sad, though.

Well done! Very in character and very realistic. Even religious people shake their fists in the face of heaven from time to time and scream, "WHY?!" At least I do. Sometimes ya just gotta vent! And I would say our Erik has a perfect right to!

*cries* Aw!! I can so see Erik saying all that, and cursing god as he did. That was so sweet. MORE ONE SHOTS!!

Wow That was really good. I enjoyed reading that a lot! Even though I'm Catholic it was still fun to read. It's like he was thinking that when he was singing when he watched the fop (hehe) go with Christine. Very well done.