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NLF
2007-12-31 . chapter 12
My goodness, this is probably the most well thought out bit of fanfiction I've ever read! And well written, to boot! I realize it's been awhile, but I know I'd read on if there were more!

And I've seen the TI pirate show 0 - brilliant place to people watch from :)
Anakah
2006-03-17 . chapter 4
This is quite strange so far but I like it! :)
Linda
2006-02-18 . chapter 12
I am so exited that you are finally continuing this! I've been waiting so long!
Airlady
2006-02-15 . chapter 12
Great Neville story!
Linda
2005-11-13 . chapter 11
I adore this fic (just as I adore Neville). Please update soon!
Nosilla
2005-10-28 . chapter 11
Oh...
Nosilla
2005-10-06 . chapter 10
Cool... more about Neville and Josie...
celisnebula
2005-10-05 . chapter 10
At the risk of possibly ruining this for everyone, kyer, (for those of you who haven't figured it out, I am sorry) the ghost in Craig Mhor is Snape. Part of good story telling is working ones way there, and the story between Neville and Josie's courtship is an integral part; especially when you consider she is a Muggle who will eventually be faced with the specter of Snape. I have this outlined to be at least 50+ chapters, which in my book is a nice long read, if you haven't the patience to wait, I'm not planning on introducing Snape for at least another 3 to 4 chapters, since I need to do other things with this piece first.

I figured everyone would have realized this, since the storyline is based on the Ghost and Mrs. Muir movie, where the widow falls in love with a sarcastic ghostly sea captain, but, I guess not.
kyer
2005-10-05 . chapter 1
The best feature of a browser is the Find On This Page one. It allows me to check suspicous stories for erroneous information. Like your story claiming (under FFN the character category you set upon uploading)that Severus Snape is at least one of two chosen main characters in this tale.

You see, after the second part failed to even mention my favorite character, I used Find to do a quick search of the rest of them. Came up nil.

Please fix your story settings.
Leena
2005-10-04 . chapter 10
Ohh... Keep going! I like this fic a lot! Can't wait to see how Neville tells her!
Lin
2005-09-25 . chapter 9
Please update soon!
excessivelyperky
2005-09-04 . chapter 9
Neat story! (I'm a raving Snape fan, and I Have My Suspicions about the owner of the 'cottage'). I like Josie immensely and glad that Neville got some happiness before the Peruvian whatsit got him (well, at least it wasn't a plant named Audrey...).
Jenny
2005-09-04 . chapter 9
This is so awesome! I love it! I can't wait for more!
duj
2005-06-21 . chapter 6
This is taking quite a while to get to the business end of the story. A disappearing cat and an inaccessible cellar - any connection with the house ghost?
duj
2005-06-04 . chapter 4
What a charming place!? Hermione seems a bit more flippant than I'd expect.
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