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Smithy
2009-07-04 . chapter 1
I was in stitches when I read the section involving the practical joke. Was that Miss Piggy, because it sure as heck sounded like that. If I were Bonnie, I would have strung Ponch and Grossie up by their boots, upside down. The rusty pliers threat, that was great.
DaynaWayna
2008-06-11 . chapter 1
Wow... here's ANTOTHER Gem that I missed for years! Mady, this was adorable. I loved it! I must say though, at first I thought he was doing a "Camelot crossover", and I was going, 'uh, Mady? What are you doing?' but then I realized what it really was. You are a very tricky lady.

You cracked me up with all those slams on Ponch being "slow". LOL! "Ponch was several steps behind everyone else in any given waltz" OR "Ordinarily, Ponch's mind worked along the lines of a refrigerator door: the light seldom came on until the half-way point in any given conversation." OMG I almost choked on my laughter! Too funny.

I'm very glad that the 'princess' turned out to be real... and that she really liked him, too. You did a great job creating the case and wrapping it up. But poor Barry... he suffered so much! But I'm SO GLAD Ponch got it in the end. But what about Grossman? He was just as guilty and all he got was pie in the face? LOL :) OH well. Ponch deserved what he got though.

Great Job overall. You're such a clever writer and I really enjoy your work.
Cloudburst2000
2002-09-02 . chapter 1
This was a very good story. Oh and just for your enlightenment, the reason they are called CHP and not LAHP is because they are Chicago Highway Patrol, not LA Highway Patrol...so please stop saying they are located in LA. Other than that little irksome detail...a very good story.
SJ
2000-05-07 . chapter 1
Very Good!
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