OMG that was kilarious!I loved the end about Rath!

*giggles* This was cute. I spent the entire thing half-expecting Kitchel to randomly walk in while That was investigating and walk off with the box that she had hidden somewhere... XD

Very funny. I liked the ending. *pats Thats* Old habits die hard. XD

Pocky? *offers*

-Ally

'Twas funny. Very ironic. Good work! It was nice to read something out of the usual box of DK fanfiction (all the angst and whatnot). So... what exactly was Rath reading? o.O (And I really think you should work on your Alternate Dimension fic... I love that one. But yeah, this was great! Congratz on coming back to life.
~Peridot-chan

YAY! You finally wrote more!! ^_^ Definately do some more cases! This one was awesome! XDD Poor Galaba... Alfeegi's never gonna stop pestering him now! >33

I'm hoping that I'm the first reviewer, though I'm not sure. This was funny! It reminded me of Yoh as Sherlock Holmes (another mystery fanfiction) only the case actually got solved by Thatz! What was with the book though? I'm genuinely interested

Fumi