Aww, I liked this! Knives' thoughts in the beginning are just awesome! You wrote everything so well! I love his opinion on writing and on art, and about creation and emotion.

LOL, it's ironic that in the thoughts you wrote of him, he believes that writing is just recycled ideas.

It's funny in a strange sort of way that I am learning this through writing. That was pretty awesome.

I'm sort of warming up to the idea of Knives/Millie. It's most certainly an interesting pairing if it can be pulled off. You wrote Knives' thoughts on her so well.

Anyway, this was a very good story! Please forgive my ramblings...

*must go to sleep*

-Alaena

Oh I love your stories!!

Aww. Poor Knives. That's what he deserves for being a cruel-hearted, murdering machine. A sexy, cruel-hearted murdering machine. >.>; It's understandable why Millie can't forgive him. Sheesh, he killed Wolfwood. Or, had him killed anyway. Maybe one day they will be friends? Great fic. Off to my favorites list!

- Katsumi-chan

WOW! 0_0 Nice one-shot! You have great grammar and spelling skills. Not to mention using the concepts of Venus and Mars was great! Good job!

oh my goodness, this can only be summed up in one word: amazing! the idea of mars and venus was so clever, and the way you wrote it was wonderful. the words flowed in such a way that when it was over, i didn't want it to be. it sounded like something knives would say too...the way you worded it. great job!

Ah, this reminded me that Aphrodite (Venus) and Aries (Mars) were lovers. Those who thought Aries just a god of War, and only had hate, while they had found that he had emotions such as Love, or lust, for he and Aphrodite shared eachothers bodies.

Tis true to, how to love and war become one, without a downfall? An answer that cannot be given I suppose.

I did love this story, and the few stoeis I've read that are Milly/Knives has slowly gained my respect, and I dare say love of the pairing. It's an intense and interesting pairing, that could, or could not work. All depending on how Knives had turned out after the last episode.

I believe that this story is an exceptional one among many out there. It's well written, and gives you insight, and has hidden meanings (in my eyes they were hidden, with the thought that you had to be insightful to understand them). I enjoyed reading this.

You should make more stories such as this. It seems odd that you would portray them as Venus and Mars. But the Goddess and God fit so well with their beings, their characterization. Well done.

Farewell.

-squeals- Blu ficcy! It's always a nice surprise to see one of these in my mailbox when i get home!

AHA! I KNEW you'd finish this story! You had sent me the first half a few months ago to read through and you acted like you'd never go back to it. I KNEW you'd finish it.

Okay, there were some typos and you kinda digressed (but you did warn about it being choppy and, like you said, you had a two month or so break in between writing this), but it still came out great. I particularly like the ending.

It makes me OH, SO amused to see once little Ms. Super-Mega-Ultra-Anti-Knives/Millie writing a one shot like this. Oh, so funny. And to think you said you didn't like writing Knives!

You did a good job, Blu! Very nice emotion and the ending was particularly pleasing. -huggy- Wonderful work! Hopefully your one-shot hiatus has finally come to an end. ^_^

Very nice story! I even feel sorry for the poor guy! Now he will know of eternal pain and suffering... Knowing the human he fell in love with won't love him back.

This is amazing Blu-Chan. Simply Amazing. This is only the secound or third time you've done Knives POV and it is wonderful. -Applause-

I liked this story alot. I thought the reformed Knives was portrayed well. Will you continue?

Oh, this is sublime! The first person perspective was so believable, done so smoothly, that it had the same effect as well-written dialogue. I just love an introspective, sympathetic Knives, and his literacy was an extra nice touch. Brava! Marveilluse! As one who can only echo and not create, I can only hope that you cherish your tremendous talent.

Aww. You made three of 'em sad! I even feel sorry for Knives, and I've never even liked him!

Yeah, it's that good.

Blu-chan, you're amazing, you know that? You really are. I mean, just the language and how you presented this story was enough for it to be an incredible piece of writing, and you even have a wonderful (although sad) story behind it. Simply marvelous.

You've outdone yourself yet again, Blu-chan.