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| elisaday16 2006-12-09 ch 5,  | abuseHey! COMPLETED ?! I want more, much more of this awesome story! I'm turning 16 on the 16th, so I wish that for my birthday! Please! Just as a birthday present! Have a nice day |
| ethereal girl 2006-11-21 ch 5, | abuseLoved the last chapter especially how Cole reacted to Jake "Cole began to break his ribs one by one, white hot rage consuming him, and he was halfway done before he felt Phoebe’s hand on his shoulder pulling him back." And that Phoebe is not mad at him this time, and the very best was the scene were Cole sweps her off her feet and carries her inside - so sweet! |
| Novmber.StaR 2006-08-06 ch 5, | abuseo please let there be a sequel, or at least an epilogue! you seriously can't leave it like this for the ending! |
| Celtic Cross 2006-03-30 ch 5, anon. | abuseThis story is intreguing!! Update soon ok? OK! |
| Ancient Galaxy 2005-09-12 ch 5, | abuseI love it ! Really quite heartfelt :-) ! Although not quite sure why Phoebe didn't fight back against Jake, considering all her martial arts training she's had. But I suppose Cole had to rescue her in some romantic way ;-) The Author/Authoress is always King/Queen of everything, so I duely bow down to you ;-) ! |
| mandymoore1 2005-08-24 ch 1, | abusethis is a fantastic story and i like it alot |
| Barb6 2005-07-02 ch 6, | abuseI really enjoyed this story - but I missed the five chapters you cut. Please post them as a sequel or continue this story. I want to read more about Phoebe and Cole - I love how you write these characters and I want them to have a happy ending. |
| afallenblackrose 2005-06-15 ch 10, | abusePhoebe's daughter huh? Well, this should be interesting. Update soon. |
| Phoebe Turner Halliwell 2005-06-10 ch 10, | abuseI love this story, I love this chapter! I have a confession to make: even if this is your first fic, I have the feeling that you're borned with this all fanfiction thing. You have no idea how great this story sounds from the part of someone who didn't write it. It sounds gr8! It is great. Keep on like this and upd8 soon. Phoebe Turner Halliwell |
| LozzieLiz 2005-06-10 ch 10, | abuseoh... interesting. i really like the idea. please continue soon |
| Blue eyes6 2005-06-09 ch 10, | abuseI love this story. It's so great. I just can't wait till Cole or Phoebe tell Paige off. She very mean spirited. She needs to relax. |
| gurlzruletheworld 2005-06-09 ch 1, | abusethis is gr8! i luv it! u cudve built it up a bit more tho insted of goin strate into it! |
| Blue eyes6 2005-06-08 ch 9, | abuseWhat a powerful chpt. I loved how Phoebe stood up for Cole. Paige is really starting to get on my nerves. She doesn't know when to quit. I really love this story. |
| PheobeColelovers 2005-06-07 ch 9, | abuseUpdate please. I can't wait |
| Blue eyes6 2005-06-06 ch 8, | abuseWhat a great chapter, I love it. I love how Katryn talked to Paige, the same way Paige treats Cole. Seemns she doesn't like Paige either. Please update soon, I worried about Phoebe. |