Brill just brill whoa I am speechless -

WOW! This is so utterly amazing... just amazing... i almost have no words really, totally speachless... especially the end, and Reni's appearance... man, this was so good! :) Well, anyhow, the idea is amazing and i really hope you continue this, as it is said in the end... book one... Keep up the great work, my friend! Best wishes! :)

P.S.: well i gotta tell you one thing, if you like that Brazilian dish with the cow's stomach so much as your character did, i bet you'll love a similar Bulgarian soup called 'shkembe'... hihihi... :) Maybe i'll treat you someday, who knows, even though i hate that thing :) hihihi... Best of luck, SilverBlue signing out ;)

Wow...A wonderful chapter! The appearance of Reni Milchstrasse is a nice scene, and the fighting scene with Vittoria is wonderful. I can't wait for the eleventh chapter and the second book...I just want to know more about Ikazuchigumi. Well, Mr. Team Leader, do your best! _

Emi...sniff...sniff...May the Nun rest in peace...

This is an interesting chapter. Emi's death is a good turning point, and things with the dental prosthesis are getting very, very interesting...I'm curious what Benji is making and what will he make after that...

Please continue soon...I always support you!

Haruna Tanaka.

nice job my friend keep it up

Wow! What a neat chap :) Everything is slowly falling into place... Poor player-san - dead? ahh, no way, i bet he's that brown haired waiter, slowly waiting for the mercenaries to get drunk so he could kill them... hehehe *evil laugh*, naughty cat boy... the blue aura twist was a really nice thing, ride on... MacGyver, that sounds so familiar, but i can't remember from where... ahhr... watashi no baka! anyways, nice job, keep it up! Best wishes :)

Unlike the others who have flamed you, I don't really give a crap if you warp the characters. But, you fucking suck.

Love,

Cybell.

I would like to take this opportunity to reply to your answer. First off, I would like you to read this http:/missy. and if for nothing else than to improve your character development for future fics.

Now accept it or not, but your stories and characters are unoriginal. It reminds of a good few years back just as I was coming to my obsession with point horrors. By that point I was able to write practically scene for scene the entire book including all the major plot twists. It's exactly the same with your fics, except for when you decide skew the story for for no good logical reason. I refer here to Outcast where you strand the Theatre out God knows where for the purpose of massacring some cannibals, bonding with Maria and, not forgetting, making Ohgami look like a total twat, so he can be captured, so TADA Super Benji can come to the rescue.

By the way, I did not call you sociopath. I said that the degree of violence in your fics (again another unoriginal element in almost all your fics) was sociopathic. Do be a dear and check context. Also I don't care if your a freaking Rambo clone, NOBODY would be able to take on eleven armed men single handed.

Which brings me to your character. And yes he is unoriginal. You simply change the packaging a little bit the core product is still the same.

And for another matter I believe YOU are forgetting Yuri. Maria seems quite content to hop into your bed within the space of a few chapters. Even for Ohgami it took several years before they got that intimate.

And what is your obsession with having Maria say "Sooner or later I going to get pregnant *swoon*" Perhaps you aren't aware, but the condom has been around for a long, long time. Not to mention that traditional methods of contraception such as the rhythm method was actually quite effective. And not forgetting that while in our time line the pill wasn't invented till the 60's, the ST universe is practically as advanced as us despite being set in the 20's, so it is conceivable that they have already invented it.

And yes, you DO warp Maria's personality in all your fics. Even forgetting the ones set during the games, the OVA's and movie's show that while she does grow warmer and more open, she still retains and air of distance to sum it up briefly.

I'm afraid I have to go now, but do tell me are you always so melodramatic? - "Like a person giving a letter to the police in order to help a case"

I support you fully in your works...Keep working!

You've given a good answer...I agree with you...

Really nice chapter... My, what a cgaracter that Emi is...i love it... can barely wait to see what will hapen next, you gotta update soon...r... please... I love CSI, great series... adorable... Law and order too... anyways, keep up the good job, best wishes :)

Everything is getting more and more interesting. I'm quite surprised with Emi's past...But, it has given her the ability she can use to help Benji on the run, and, thanks to her past, then..._

Your scenes are great. I like them much. I'm getting curious, and, please continue this story soon...

Very very interesting turns... nice chapter, really nice. Keep up the great work! ;) I especially liked the part about the key chain... really nice...ah *blissful sigh*... Best wishes :)

good job my friend

good chatper keep it up

Nice job keep it up