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Aaron Hotchner
2005-05-17
ch 1,
abuseNo i don't think it's too dirty, i loved that. I more of a Danny/Aiden Flack/OC shipper, but it's good to read different ones for a change. I loved that, especially the part where she says to her aunt she hopes she gets a load of STD's, and the bit where she climbs out of her window and down the fire escape. That was great, i loved it, and i really really want you continue, i'd love to see her aunts reaction, more should i say read her reaction.
bigandcarrie
2005-05-15
ch 1,
abuseThat was smoking! Off the charts.
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