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i hope im part of the 80% of the ppl u hate
and u rote dis a couple years ago, so im proud i found dis :D
its a very well-written story
and i mite have read rong, but brown hair? who's genes did iruka get those from? o.o

Actuly it is ametesuru

yo the shuraku is one and then a two taild cat up to a 9 tailed fox so great!

WHAT ABOUT YOU MAKE IT AU! XD


Ever heard 'Voyage of the unicorn' {Yes,sounds corny.. >.< Oh well.} ?


Its about a father and his two daughters in the modern world find them selves in a alternate universe. Well.. WHY DONT YOU STEAL THE PLOT!


{Example: Sakura in the 1850's instead of modern times,and is attacked by a demon group called the Akasuki. She escapes through the back door with the help of a mysterous elf{Naruto} and his older companion{Kakashi}. They escape through a boat,and are transported into a magical world..


They head over to the farie world thingy,and the queen{Tsunade} or whatever she calls herself sends them to rescue a thing.. {In the movie they must rescue a dragon to find out its already dead,but perferably i suggest they are sent to find a boy,and find to see him asleep and unwakeable.}


The Akasuki steal the sleeping boy{Sasuke i perfer..},and as friends that help them like for example,Ino could be the goddess that thinks she ugly or can kill anyone by making eye contact. Neji can be the guy that is a manitor thing... {YOU KNOW WHAT THIS IS TOO COMPLEX TO EXPLAIN.. WATCH THE MOVIE!! XD.}

Is sakura and naruto like,17 or 12? XD I dont know if this is before or after shippuden.. XD

Thank god Naruto's son did'nt get pink hair!

Sheerly amazing, one of the first fics I read, this fic is a spark of sheer genius. It is ranked in my top 5 favorites and is probably the 3rd best fic I have ever read and is one of the few fics responsible for inspireing me to create this account. Thank you for writing and great job!

NaruSaku is my favorite pairing as well. I have great expectations for this fic, LD 1449 is one my favorite writer on this site and this story is one his favorites, and so far it looks like it exceeds those expectations.

Man i love happy endings. Overall this story was amazing and i loved it. A was a great read, and a job well done.

I normally don't review in the middle of a completed fic, but I just wanted to tell you, if you don't know already, that Kyuubi's not the "real" name of the demon. Actually, Shukkaku can also be called Ichibi, since Ichi (as far as I know) means "one" and Kyuu means "nine", so Kyuubi is just a human-given name for the nine-tails, telling just the number of tails there are... so there are Ichibi, Nibi, Sanbi, Yonbi, Gobi, Rokubi, the next two I don't really know, I can't remember the vocabulary for seven and eight^^, and finally Kyuubi... But just as I say, if you already know then just ignore this, if you didn't either appreciate that I gave you that information or just say it doesn' matter and I shouldn't write you such a **^^

ok well im new to fan fic but i totlly agree with u on the whole narusaku pairing u should write another story close to this one its excellent and when im motivated enough i will finally move my ** to write my own naruto sakura fic

Great fic!

i dont mean to flame or watever but byakugan cant see clones (notice chunin exams with neji vs naruto) neji was only able to tell which one he THOUGHT was naruto because he was so called ''holding back'' but eh it just cliked in my head wen kakashi said he wanted the byakugan btw i believe its spelled Ichiraku

lol i like the dream i read it like 5 times...hehe its easy to get me to laugh

that was a great story i sat and read the whole thing in 1 go great job