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New lord of darkness
2008-03-10 . chapter 4
will you bring Nabs from the Matrix, I bet she could decypher the Matrix better then the operators
Cross177
2007-12-03 . chapter 4
Man o man this is getting pretty good, keep it up and keep on goin and update ASAP, or whenever you can
hedatary
2007-12-01 . chapter 3
i can't believe someone actually wrote a crossover of this caliber. The writing style is amazing, you have common sense to not get lazy , not to mention you look like you read the book as well. Nice fic keep it up. gl.
t-dugong
2007-11-16 . chapter 4
nice story. i guess in a way you could say that nerima would be an ideal breeding ground for long term agent avatars. or some kind of controlled experiment for the architect, a "controlled anomaly-situation" kinda thing. i'm no expert in computing...but if all the anomalies in the matrix could be put in a single place, the machines would have an easier time watching out for any potential "The One", like one of those bad sectors in a hard disk. from what i gather, the machines seem to prefer as much "hands-off" approach as possible, until the situation demands otherwise. so the nerima setup have more credence. and imagine dr. tofu as another super program working with the oracle, like that chinese guy in matrix 2 & 3. i mean...he's the local doctor, so he can monitor the area for potentials. he's low profile...and it seems to me his quirk is a bit too contrived, compared to the other characters in nerima. hehehe...and it seems to me that ms. hinako could be another super-program. she could be an agent with a special task, watching after ranma for signs that he is the one. sorry if it seems like i'm rambling, it's just that your fic have so much possibilities. anyway, keep it up and i'll be looking for more updates. take care!
Lov Ranma Fanfic
2007-07-14 . chapter 1
you just had to have Ryouga and Akane go with Ranma to the real world...you know i would have liked this story if they wernt involved. I give you a 1 out of 10. Any story that has them involved is trash as far as im concerned. I hate them. They cant handle reality so they make one up to make them feel good about themselves.Sure Ranma does that to some degree but he was raised that way. Ryouga and Akane had plenty oppertunitys to acept the ral world in there childhood.Akane was raised in a fairly normal family and Ryouga saw the real world through his travels.Thier both bakas as far as im concerned.If you make a version of this fanfic without them tell me otherwise im not gonna like this story.
deitarion/SSokolow
2006-10-18 . chapter 4
Excellent story, but why must Ranma-Matrix crossovers always end up going on permanent hiatus?

Oh, I don't suppose you remember the name and author of the Ranma-Matrix crossover where Ranma turned out to be a pair of opposite-gender twins who, until they were pulled, had been synchronized to the same in-matrix identity? I'm trying to find it again so I can add it to my personal fanfic archive.
AkaiKamiRyu
2006-09-10 . chapter 4
This story's amazing! I can't wait to hear what the orical has to say. Please update soon.
Silver Warrior
2005-12-16 . chapter 4
Now this is very cool.
thablackkuririn
2005-10-05 . chapter 4
I love what you're doing with this story, even if Ranma/Akane is close to my least favorite match up from the canon. Some elements I liked: plausible reason for the characters acting slightly OOC; Ranma and Ryoga being on par or better with Neo and Morpheus; the Matrix characters staying in character despite the weirdness of Ranma. Constructive crits: the setup for getting Ranma, Akane, and Ryoga out of the Matrix seemed rushed and a bit too convenient; Akari's appearance seems like throwing a bone to Ryoga to mitigate conflict over Akane.

Overall, this is good, better than some I've read, with more meat on it than is usual for I look forward to reading the next chapter.
NeverTooOld
2005-08-06 . chapter 4
Nicely done story. I especially liked the battle between Neo and Ranma...a double KO! I'm looking forward to seeing more of this story as well as more of your work in general.

Thanks for entertaining stories.

Jon Schuman
NeverTold
sivart4482
2005-07-13 . chapter 4
Ranma cane che base is techable to the lost boy and i love the story good job more wood be nice
DeusXM
2005-06-28 . chapter 4
Extractions: Ukyo, Shampoo, Nabiki, Kasumi, Tofu,
that little voice in your head
2005-06-24 . chapter 4
I did enjoy chpt 4 very much. You are such a great writer! If Kuno's going to be extracted, it'll be really interesting.
Slade13
2005-06-22 . chapter 4
nice work thus far.
yeah, akari is back in the game!
keep up the great work!
till next...
ss4-link
2005-06-20 . chapter 4
Let's see I bet it's Akane, Ryoga, Genma, or Ukyo. Good chapter.
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