This is super sweet. You are an awesome writer:]

-haleyXsparrow-

didn't see your Livejournal address in your profile to read the unedited version of this fic. oh well, I will go there anyways and look for it. I assume the part that was edited was 'THE REALLY GOOD PART'?? hehehe...

Ahh. It was about time, really. Beautifully written, as always.

I just read it on live journal, and it was amazing! I don't think that it would against any "rules" or anything if you posted the whole thing on this site... I've read much worse. Defiantly more... tasteful (if that's the right word?) than a lot of ones that are on fanfiction. You are a really great writer! I also read "Maps of the World" on live journal, and it is awesome as well! I cannot wait to read more of you work!! You are a fantastic writer!!

Ooh! Jack and Elizabeth are steamin'!! lol.

"sigh"
I've read your un-edited version at your life-journal.
A good job very well done.
A beautiful and very much in-character scene.
Thank you!

i LOVE this little series. it's so well done. please write more!

It WAS about time! OMG, I can't even articulate how gorgeous and sensual that was.Elizabeth's confession was...superb. This has to be my favorite out of your series, though I love all of them! I can't believe more people haven't reviewed!

Really like the stories in the series. It would be wonderful if they continued.

I think you just gave me a heart attack. I read the whole thing on your LJ but since I'm too lazy to get a LJ account I'm reviewing here: LOVED it. Your prose is utterly beautiful and comparable only to a few, hang on, let me check something...hm, you don't have any favorite authors. Well, here's a suggestion: If you've seen Once Upon a Time in Mexico (which every Johnny Depp fan should) you must check out Miss Becky. I worship at her feet, and yours too, for that matter.

I love all your stories! You really capture the "voices" of the characters. My only quibble - we need more! Thank you for your consistantly excellent work.

and why am i the only reviwer on this site? when you are by far the BEST j/e author i have ever read! took your advice and went to live journal for the un-edited story, and am thrilled that i did. no one can write the speech of the 17th century better than you. only rarely can you find a gem like yours among the pre-teen dreck that is
! more j/e please, i'm begging here!