This is good, love stories with a young Jiraiya/Orochimaru/Tsunade. In a way, so much like team seven.

Hrm. I'm really liking your Sannin stories so far. Your Jiraiya is interesting, and your Orochimaru is a lil different, but it sounds enough like him to me.

I love it! I adore the way you write Orochimaru; the way he's so smug and bored and well, more 'speshul' than everyone else. XD And damn, I love JiraiOro. There is not enough of it around. You help the fill the gap and you fill it so well! Thank you! *love* ^^

sad. really gloomy and congrats on a fiction nicely done.

Hm...still, it feels more like naruto , sasuke and sakura relationship more than sannin. Maybe you feel that the younger sannin relationship is very similar to team 7 relationship?