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CrazyXAngel
2009-11-24 . chapter 7
update!
Jombra
2009-02-06 . chapter 7
Yey.
I luv this story.
:3
Mcky
2008-06-03 . chapter 1
I love this story! Please update soon. I can't wait.
joshwebb153
2007-10-01 . chapter 7
I love this story!! Please start updating it soon!!
jadedrache
2007-09-08 . chapter 7
hmm.why did ya loose interest in that one? it's one of your most original, I must say. ya japanese show-off you!^^ lots of love, hope you'll someday find the time to work on this...
RuneNeko
2007-07-06 . chapter 7
Cool! I like it, it's pretty amusing. I wonder how they'll take it when they find out that Goku's been hiding his chi? It'll be so funny!
Justary
2007-01-28 . chapter 7
Please , please , please keep writting this fic, is FANTASTIC!
brenu
2006-11-15 . chapter 7
what! not a cliffhanger
Jade
2006-05-01 . chapter 7
Please keep on writing. I really like the story. I can't wait to read what will happen next. Launch and Nappa?
Thanks.
Gabbs
2006-04-30 . chapter 7
OMG!
you up-dated...
thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou!
you are so awsome!
although i'm glad you up-dated it's not one of your best chapters and a bit short but i love the plot line and the way you have rattiz start to warm up to goku and gohan...mh...gohan...tee hee sorry -.-
but gohans my fav. character!
espeacally his chibi self so adorable.
oops sorry getting off topic anyway like i said love the plot line just don't make me wait so long for the next chapter.
keep uo the good work
heiress2thethrone
2006-04-30 . chapter 7
wonderful story. i luv it so far. a lil too much information for me about chi chi and goku since im not a big fan of chi chi, but im dealing with it. lol. and i take it kushami is the blonde/navy haired chick who sneezes and changes personalities. cool beans. update soon.
Coca-Cola Classic0
2006-04-30 . chapter 7
^-^
Coca-Cola Classic0
2006-04-16 . chapter 6
Aww, that was so cute and the whole concept of Gohan learning all those new terms was really cute^-^ update soon.
walutahanga
2006-03-26 . chapter 6
A good fic. I'm impressed. I always like seeing Chi-Chi get in touch with her warrior-side. I was a little surprised you had Bulma training as well, but it could make for some interesting character development.

I like how you're developing Radditz here. You've acknowledged that he's a bastard, but you've given him depth as well. I particularly enjoyed the last chapter, where Gohan asks what those swear words mean. It does make sense that, given his father's choice of friends, he'd be exposed to a lot of swearing. Poor Chi-Chi...

Anyways. I'm seeing a definite improvement in your writing with each chapter. The last chapter, in particular, ran much more smoothly, and was extremely enjoyable. So don't give up! I want to see where this is headed.
rocks and glass
2006-02-09 . chapter 6
that was so funny! please update soon, i want to read more!
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