Beautiful. So poignant. Great job.

very good as usual hm you do not seem to like greg cox much hehehehe guess i should not have recommended reading underworld blood enemy then whoops hehehehe great job once again

Nice work, once again. I should get around to seeing Underworld... XD

an intersting play with this take could've been the fact that a priest tried to kill Sonja (the priest that killed her mother) and because of the priest's attack, Lucian and Sonja developed more intimacy and later became lovers.

as always, your skill for expressing his plight is beyond compare!

bravissima!

I always hope to see more from you

Rather good, I like it.