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inu-fluff-luvrS.Weez
2009-11-06 . chapter 28
So I read this story the first time you wrote it, years ago. And I still love it. Just sayin. <3
Will there ever be a HiroshixKagome? That would be fun. <3
You = pwnage.
memeylupht
2009-10-11 . chapter 28
I'd rather lov this one...
Thanks for the story,, really Awesome !
This ending chapter really touching...
I'll look forward for another stories of yours... So keep it up and keep workin' ne., ^__^
AliGirl13
2009-09-19 . chapter 28
I'm going to tell you right now, I'm being completely honest, and I'm sorry if you feel like I've insulted you. I don't mean to.

I am completely and utterly amazed.
This compares to some of the best stories on this site.
And believe me, I've read plenty.
The way you write is'nt the prettyest, or most descripitive that I've read, but the way you tell the story makes up for everything. Most stories like this get so caught up in describing the oc's that the writers never get anywhere with the plot, but you have managed to make a almost perfect balcence between the plot, and the not-so important bits. I love how each charecter has his or her own distinct personality, and not that they each seem almost like copys of each other. Even the twins each had their own different quirks that made them unique.
I comletly cannot get over the premis for this story! I have never seen an idea like it, and I am comlpetely amazed! The idea of a human being a 'pet' is conpletely unique, (while being completely halirous) and the way you deliverd the story made it one-of-a-kind. I love the humor you managed to incoprate into almost every chapter, and also the seriousness of the curcamstances. It was also nice that you didn't overdo the humor, that it was a nice even balence between the funny and the sad. Sometimes I wished that you had kept more with either the happy or the sad, but it all turned out right in the end. I personally like the first ending the best, but I'm one of the ones waiting semi-pacently for the twins/kagome ending to come out - I absoultly loved them.
Very amazing story. Good job, and keep writing!
~Ali
xXBloodySharinganXx
2009-09-12 . chapter 28
Wow, I think all my teeth rotted and fell out...I LOVE THIS STORY! *sends boxes of pie and cyber cookies* Wah! *worships the ground you walk on* I can't believe its over!
neriel
2009-07-19 . chapter 27
I absolutely loved this story. I sincerelly hope you do make an alternate ending with Kagome and the twins (really, they are just too likeable)
UchihaSakura2007
2009-07-11 . chapter 28
i loved the fist ending and epilouge, but i love the alternate ending more! so cute when kagome was trying to reach through sesshoumaru! Kawaii!
Moon Haired Priestess
2009-07-04 . chapter 27
I like both endings though you never said what happened to Inuyasha and the others. I hope you make a sequal.
NYCGirl89
2009-07-03 . chapter 1
That was a pretty decent story. The characters that you have created are lovable and quite memorable. Your plot was well-conceptualized, but the way it played out was predictable. Also, if Hide was 2nd in command, why wasn't he introduced before? The story could have been more polished than it was. You used all-caps and bolding a bit too much. In the first alternate ending, Sesshoumaru is far too OOC to make it believable. Also, where are the other promised alternate endings? Overall, congratulations on a job well done!
MysticShadow
2009-06-25 . chapter 28
Hey its me gems-stones I wanted to let you know I have changed my user name so please dont think its a diffrent person k i still LOVE MEGA UBER LOVE your story so please keep up the good work

You biggest fan~Sheoki16
IrisAyame
2009-06-11 . chapter 28
Whaou! (a french way to say 'wow', it's admirative) I LOVED your story... It was so much fun!
Thank you VERY MUCH for writing it!
I prefer your first ending (the one you wanted to write from the beginning) which is much more "dramatic" than the second one (which is more "casual").
I hope you're going to have as inspiration as for this story in all things you're going to do from now!
I hope to read things from you again!

Iris (french reader, sorry for any possible grammar mistakes in my rewiew)

2009-06-04 . chapter 1
this is my fourth time reading this story! i just cant get enough of it! i have read soo many other stories but i have to say that this is my all time favorite! :)) keep writing
Bad Banana Cherub
2009-06-01 . chapter 1
I absolutely love your story, it's so original! I think your a great author so please write some more Sess/ kag stories! thanks for coming up with such an awesome idea and sharing it with the rest of us! =)
blacksheep
2009-05-04 . chapter 28
Dear PagasusRider, this story was really great; I enjoyed it immensely.
Please write the alternate ending with the twins too, I´m still waiting for it eagerly. It would only be fair now that Sesshoumaru got her twice.
P.S. I liked the original ending better, less mushy and I don´t believe in the perfect fairy princess ending.
Still, great job!
Emelza
2009-04-25 . chapter 27
I love your story!! But I wouldn't mind if you make Sesshoumaru suffer a bit more.. keke
Sessy & Kags Forever!! <3
2009-04-03 . chapter 28
I Love This Story!! I Love The Alternate Ending More Than The Other One But They Are Both great! WRITE MORE Or Else!! Lol ;)
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