I loved this story. You should write an entire story of Nomak.

Wow, that was a really great piece :) Your characterization of Nomak and just the story in general was really great. Good job!

Excellent. This is a great depiction of Nomak. I never thought he was a monster, as some stories portray him to be, but a tortured soul, as you portray him.
Poor baby just can't help himself.
Excellent characterization...but u can't have the rights to Nomak, cuz I want him...maybe we could share? :P

Rather nice and a bit longer then you're other stories to.