Wow that was like one of thr best storys i've ever read and I'm a book face I truly love thr fact that kisshu loved and cared about her so much and wad crying when he left her with the mew mews.Tart was good to the fact when he and pudding were battling they were being nice to eachother.In my opinion Kisshu was the best I love kisshu if he was real that would be truly amazing.I can't wait till your next book as I'm a big Tokyo and mew mew fan myself.

Ive got one word and thats

AMAZING!

So cute!!

OMG that was so sad! *Cries* But so cute! I love the aliens!
~Nya!~

I'm glad you ended the ending scene. That makes things a bit better and more well-rounded.

I noticed you didn't fix the thing with Tart being a teenager, though... And there are some other typos scattered throughout. It looks like the middle part was largely untouched from the first draft version.

I did notice, I think, some new stuff and thoughts in the first segment, which I was pleased about. And I did think I noticed that Pai's thoughts at the end of the second segment were new. I like that, though I also wonder if it was too sudden of a change of heart.

I like the tension of the battle between Pai and Kisshu. I would have enjoyed seeing that described in more detail, because it was my favorite part. Though Arissa was sweet and I liked Kisshu's goodbye to her. I still think she should have reacted to him saying he killed her parents, though. It just doesn't seem logical for her not to say or do something when he said that.

All in all, I know you said you don't have any more ideas for this, but you left it wide open for a sequel. XD

OMFG! Such a good ending! I almost cried it was so sweet! Luvz story as much as Phantom of the Opera (can't stop listening to it) You should do a sequel! NYA NA NO DA! Arissa as a teenager when the aliens are gone! REBEL! lmao i'm hyper well till then

~Tangerine

WOOT! YOU ADDED THE ENDING! I love this fanfic because it was so cute in spots. I hope you make other fics.

Ne, this is a good story, but you haven't updated in a while...are you dead or something? Just wondering.

this is a cute story, please continue.

I KNOW TARTS WEAPON! I KNOW TARTS WEAPON! BUT I WONT TELL YOU IF YOU DONT WANT ME TO THAT IS IF YOU DO WANT TO TELL I WILL! GREAT STORY!! MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE!!

I was reading this story AGAIN because it so flipping great, and couldn't help but notice that you didn't put much effort in to telling us what Arrisa looked like. Heck, I dont even know what color teal is. -_- so in chapters ten and eleven, could you tell us what Arrisa looks like? Please? My magic blue sea horse that swims in air will love it if you do! [between you and me he's really annoying, shesh he allways peeping in my ear when I sleep!]

Holy cow! did Pai dicect her or somthing! crap, now Im so gosh darn curious to see what happens next!!
O_o

Darn it! I just cant wait till you update [ha! that rymes! ^_^] UPDATE SOON!

Please keep going I need to know what happens to Arissa its a great story

This whole fanfic was really nice, so I hope that you update on it soon! (well as soon as you can) Also, I'll still take you up on working on a Naruto fanfic with you sometime.

Very cute chapter.

It was short, but some chapters are like that. Great job!