Wow. very nice! A bit shorter then I expected, purhaps sometime you'll wright another fiction entirely from Wyzasukitan's point of view through out the Fire Bringer Trilogy? I liked how you had similar lines to open and close the story, for your first fic on this series it is brillant! The dragons play a small role in the books and not to much is known of Wyzasukitan but you did a wonderful job. Discriptions are very well done, just make sure you don't have to many run on scentances but over all it was very impressive! Hope to read more!

The dragons were my favorite characters, i think you have the queens perspective on life in this one.