I can not understand why you stopped writing this fiction. It is briliant. You do understand the characters's felling, personality. I think is is one of the best fanfic I have ever read (totally true). Your story is a mystery which makes me feel to discover the thought of Neji. I think this story will be perfect if you do not use Hinata to be the person to tell the story. You should be the one to do this task. This will help you to add more mysteries to the story. I do really love to discuss with you about the story. I think you should read HIASOBI's stories so that it will help you a lot. She has her own style and I think you almost get yours. Just a little bit efforts to smooth your story, it will be a diamond. Absolutely. Anyway, I'd love to contact with you. My email is . So happy if you add my nick and we can talk. Looking forward to reading your updated.

OMFG... this is SO beautiful? Will you continue this story? Definitely a FAVORITE! ^_^

is chapter 7 comiing anytime soon? do they ever make it to the snow country?

OMG! I love this story so much. PLease update soon!

LilJester

You should have finished it! It's a good story!

PLEASE UPDATE!

aaww!! its beautiful, i wanna know what happen next. please update soon!

Ive been dying to know what will happen on the next chapter. When can you update this fic?
Well the story is so cute... ^_^ Neji/Hinata

beautiful story. Please continue soon! I am dying to read more! Tensions! Ho ho!!

ah so swet! T_T

*GOOD!

This is so...GOD! u have GOT TO continue writing!

*note: i don't know where u r , but if u don't finish the next chapter soon...i'll kill u!

i have to admit you do have some raw talent.
while reading through this- i've noticed several grammatical errors- and words you've left out- but were easily filled in by the reader.
remember to stay in the past tense- since that's what you're going for.
hinata and neji's relationship is actually really cute.
and you've made the progression smooth and natural.
none of it seemed awkward or tense- this i give you brownie points on.
hope you update soon- i'd like to see how this continues- and what fuji looks like.
well good luck

Well technically it was Neji's own fault for that burn. But its so cute Hinata is so innocent and shy and Neji is over protective of her. Update

GREAT FIC! Continue on chapter 7~!