Hmm... Quite a good story you got there. But then again I like storys where the tamers get turn to digimon. I think there funny (looks around) I hope Rika didnt here that. (Rika storms in) OH SHOOT,Rika please dont OW...Great now I have a headache... Rika: That's what you get for what you said.(Rika leaves with an angry look on here face) Note to self, Never make Rika mad. Anywho great story, looking foward to more.

hey, no taking a break! you got to keep going!! please...(althouhg i already know whats gonna happen next...)

Aye...Tis a very good chapter-y fic so far..Conz(dun dun DUH!! x3) Well, I did wait to review this one till the end...mostly from pure laziness. But, from readings, I did notice [some of] those spelling errors you mentioned. But, all in all, twas a very good read :3

Such a cool story. PLease continue, I want to see how everyone will react to their parents being digimon. Love this story. ja ne!

This is a cute and cool story. Please continue. Rika and Takato forever.

Woah. Cool! What's going to happen next? :3

Finally you updated! thanks! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Great chapter this one is a goody

update soon

-Threehorn

Thanks for answering my questions That clears up the story a bit. :3

If I find that you call me a "flamer" after this reveiw you will be mistaken.

First of all I find your story to be very rushed. You rush along and give very little detail. You gave little to no explanation why they moved to America and it made very little sense.

Also you have little realism. The chances of most of their parents moving them to America is low. Rika i could understand, and even possibly Henry, but Takato! Come on. His parents run a bakery. They don't make a whole lot of money. They couldn't afford to move overseas. And you say they started a chain of bakeries. how did they do this exactly. It takes much longer that a year to start a chain.

You also offer no explanation to a lot of things. For instance how Connor wound up in Atlanta. And why Guilmon is constantly in his In-Training form? Plus why does Connor have emotional outbursts where he suddenly acts kind? One seconds hes a "digimon are tools" stereotype and the next hes all weapy. plus why does Ryo Live in a Cival War style Mansion? You have too many unexplained questions.

Another thing is that the constant digivolutions and digimon lookups are unecsesarry. In longer stories it wouldn't be as much of a problem but each chapter in this story is very short. I'd guess that 1/10 of each chapter is made up of these.

Also parts are confusing and it gets annoying to read something and not understand it entirely.

My final thought is i don't get the reasoning behind Astromons plans. Turning Humans who could easily be killed by rookies into digimon make it EASIER to take control of them. i don't get it.

Overall the story is odd and the little beggining thing makes it seem like a prequel existed. i odn't think its that great of a fic. no offense.

Yay! You finally updated! I just have a few question: how can Jenny hold her digivice if her Patamon body doesn't have any thumbs. Also I don't know if you said this before or not but i was just wondering. What is Kazu? I mean digimon wise.

Good. I never would have suspected Aden as Astodramon.

damn, thats good! can't wait to read more! when are u gonna introduce ariesmon and taurusmon?? and that 13th digimons, and waht about aquariesmon?? can't wait!!

k, so this is actualy suposed to be for chapter 9, but o well. im just placing a random guess as to Astroramon's human identity. is it... Dr. Aden? cuz if no than its one of his co-workers.

HI! Just thought i should say that i LUVED ur story (the Hypnos Virus) and i kind of had a question. K, now dont think im steeling this cuz i swear im not. But i've started writing a digimon fic of my own, only, contrary to yours, the 12 (u said 13? whered you get that and if true, whats #13?) zodiac digimon are good, not evil and have to save the digi world (again) from somethin... k9nda random thing i thought of on a whim. If it's too much along the lines of your story, i sincerly appolagise and will stop right where i am and not continue with it because i havn't posted it yet.

yours truly --K*Mac - serpent hand
ps- either email me back (email on my author page0 or just answer me in a review!! thnx!