ngaw poor noah...

Very sweet and sad, thanks for sharing!

Poor Noah.

Personally, I believe he should know Betty's secret. It would be a good story of him and Paloma finding out, and becoming her allies in fighting evil. Good idea, huh?

wow that was the awsom i cryed litrly and i am 19 i loved it keep up the good work man

we...thankies for accepting the invite to my nejiten community. :D i'm ur biggest fan. really. and i miss reading ur works about naruto chars. T3T the frog and the princess in particular. T_T

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you are invading all fandoms ate syao! XD I love this fic though it's reminiscent of my prayer, but what the hey! undertsnading promises and my prayer are 2 different stories but made by one amazing person! amazing ka!

the fic was beautiful. i'm relating to it right now since I'm waiting for lazy-kun.

Hope i see more from you ate syao! i miss your stories! and... I hope pc1 gets better.

from your kawaii adopted sis,

aya-chan

You can still use bold and italics on notepad by using html codes. There's just some fics that need to be typed soon or as I say "The plot bunny is poking me!" I like how Noah described his friendship with Betty and how the reader can relate to the story. It's good to see more Atomic Betty fanfics posted, I hope this sections keeps on growing. *.* Great story :D

Wow, this is one very well written story. You've really captured how Noah must feel every time Betty has to abruptly run of and/or be late thatnks to her "duties" and "chores".

Great work, this is definitely going in my faves list.

Perhaps NOAH thinks of Ernie's "rubber duckie"

as a...*ahem* "toy quack-quack". It's just the way HE says things...and what he thinks about Betty and her constant habit of "ducking out"

[couldn't resist that-;)] of their scheduled

fun and play time, and her constant excuses after she finishes her missions, is on the button! Only

Noah will put up with this because he really cares

(and loves) Betty for what she is...but would he

really continue their relationship if he KNEW she was a Galactic Guardian?

VERY WELL WRITTEN, 'syaoran no hime'!

i'm not much of an atomic betty fan but i like her and i like the story. it's nice to see how you used the first person POV to show what Noah was thinking...

Oh, and can i make a Nejiten request here? please? something that would really make me laugh. if you want, i could send you that wall with the background of Neji and Tenten kissing... it's a scan of a naruto chapter so it just means they're a canon pair! (_)

. it was good! Noah's my fav character, and I liked the way you described his problems. It was interesting.

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Good story, it's nice to have something in Noah's POV when Betty is frequently off on her missions. It's also kind of sad that she can't tell him. I think out of everyone, he's the only one that really cares. Though I'm not to sure about her father.

I hate to say this, but Ernie's toy is a rubber duck and is called rubber ducky. :P

Keep up the good work.

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