Wow. I knew they would do it eventually, but not like that!

Haha, I can just imagine it - "Is it a bird, is it a plane?"
"No, it's a Lux Veritatis,"...ok, that was a terrible joke. o.O

Well... That was certainly a unique way for them to get it on! :D

I'm not terribly good at my reviews, but I'll just say that I LOVE your story and always have a little squeal when I see you've updated. You write wonderfully, but that's old news :D I can't even remember if I've reviewed much in the past. I daren't look in case it turns out I haven't and that's just tragic.
I've been Youtubing the soundtracks whilst reading and it definitely gives the chapters even more of an atmosphere. I like your taste in music. Rock... New age.. = bliss.
Ok, babbling over. Look forward to the next chap.

あなたの物語ははるかに私が読んだあることが最もよい墓侵入者ファンのフィクションである!

being stuck in the hospital kept me from reviewing for awhile but i'm here now!!

so i know you hate me,you hate me for sure Acid
i thought they were going to soften their relationship a bit;you know get along in some great nice romantic hotel room!!but no they had to suprise me ..
and you know what ??!! i like it ;adore it :the fighting the changing attitude of lara ..everything..hihi
i really really like the new caracter as well;i could imagine her scary face when hearing the two of them fighting
if i may ask you something it wil be adding more narration about kutis ; you know his feeling;thinking and attires every thing about him -i know -
col i can't wait for the next chapter
keep wrinting i'm burning with passion!

Nice chapter... the non-lemon was certainly unexpected... but appropriate i think... I feel that with Ria's addition this focus is becoming more of a quest of faith for Ria and less about the premonitions of Lara's...

Wow. I knew they'd do it eventually but I never expected them to do it like that! :P Then again, the knife flinging caught me off guard too! lol

Oh man, I really love your imagination! What with the viscous door and the giant cavern with the waterfalls - good stuff!

Also laughed at the idea of Ria in that last bit! (FLYING MAYAN! XD XD XD)

Goody goody goody, please update soon! ;)

The only reason I'm not crazy about this one is because both of them are so whiny, bah! Not that it's bad for the story or anything, they're just annoying to me as people. *lol* Like a bickering couple.

I like that it's a nice concise way, though, of forcing Kurtis to go with her basically (the turned down audition, her death, etc).

Ouch. =X

I do find it a bit funny, though, that after Kurtis's initial douchebaggery he ended up being too 'clingy'. :P

Douche. Though I wonder now how he managed to get it- did she explain the broken window enough that the security team just buggered out again?

Kurtis at Starbucks is an amusing image.

You managed to make that entire gymnastics routine a fun read. ;)

My favourite part of this one is [“What are you doing here?” Lara whispered harshly.] because I can imagine her near boiling point snarling it, hee.

Why hallo thar, chicka. I've got literally nothing to do at work (it's 9:45 a.m. and I have...nothing) so I figured I would sit down and finally read through/review all of PiC before it finishes. ;) I have a bad habit of not reading or reviewing- I know the stuff is good, I know the writing is good -but I never seem to have the attention span to read...or write, really, BUT ANYWAY.

I like this little prelude, especially the image of prostitute Lara out picking fights. I also love how much of a scumbag your Kurtis is. ;) Though he's still got tinges of depressed boy who sleeps around to find fulfillment. Hehe. I also like how this one is a good hook. Short and sweet but vague enough to keep going (and keep going I shall).

Awesome chapter :) This story keeps getting better and better! :)

I like this... I like Ria... makes me wonder what type of role she's going to play in upcoming chapters... You are diabolical putting damsels in distress

Oh goodie, a new character!

I really like Ria. She seems like such-a-typical-younger-Mayan-that-can't-be-bothered-with-her-ancestors-and-anything-to-do-with-her-ancestors.

I like how Kurtis is trying to bring up things about the Maya for Ria, even though she doesn't give a toss.

Wahay!! Another chappie! Oh goodie! :)

I like how Kurtis is trying to preserve the Mayan traditions on Ria's part, and I like Ria herself! She's such a typical new-generation-of-youngin's-that-don't-really-want-anything-to-do-with-ancestral-traditions gal that I just love her! ;) ...Please don't kill her? :O

Waiting for the next chapter as always!