 V 2009-05-31 . chapter 7 Rockin and can you make more anti-kreoss/Di the genie stuff please im begging you that comic rocked. |
 AngelofDeath212 2007-09-17 . chapter 1YAY!SEQUEL!*does happy dance* |
 sorekai 2007-06-18 . chapter 7Yeh I love Norm and this story! Everyone (except the OC) are in charactor, once again great story! I hope to see a update soon!
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 Genie's Girl 2006-05-27 . chapter 1 What an awesome story! PLEASE write a sequel and fast. Well as fast as you can. I like the idea of them not being immediately all over each other- and that they act so much alike and yet are completely annoyed by one another. :) Great job! |
 aLLgirL112 2006-05-27 . chapter 7asomeness! |
 screennameless 2006-03-01 . chapter 7 Aw, that's it? Oh, wait... sequel yay! |
 Firefly4000 2005-09-20 . chapter 1lol i am guessing that Fairy Manson is a joke on the attourney known as Perry Mason lol anyways awesome job with the first chapter^^ please begin work on the next one in this series |
 Firefly4000 2005-09-18 . chapter 7awesome addition^^, the whole interaction between Norm and Tootie and the interaction between him and Des was awesome i laughed and smiled the whole way through this story, please continue^^ |
 Firefly4000 2005-09-18 . chapter 3LOL! oh man lol what i was doing with ur stories was saving my reviews for last but ehh this story deserves more then just one^^ I loved how u did the evil vile Crocker and i hope to see more of him in this awesome story^^ |
 B&M 2005-09-06 . chapter 1 I love this story you wrote. In fact, I love all your art and stories. I am also in love with Tottie's alter ego, Special Agent Trudy. She is a real babe. I hope you include her in more stories.
Here are some suggestions for your future stories and art. Why don't you draw a picture of Tootie's transformation into Trudy? And how about for your next story, we have Cosmo and Wanda find out about her alter ego, but Cupid swears them to secrecy? They would'nt even be allowed to tell Timmy about it. And to top it all off, why not have Timmy develop a major crush on Special Operative Trudy? That would be quite a paradox.
Once again, I love your art and stories. Please write more about Trudy. |
 Love.Pride.Deep-fried chicken 2005-08-12 . chapter 7I'm totaly loving your stories! There all sequels of each other!It's like a neverending story! :) Like.. hmm, a soap! Eveyone ages and the main story changes and stuff^_^ It's an FOP soap! heehee, jesus how do you get everyone in character like that? I can seriously imagine your stories as actual episodes |
 Eternal Silence 2005-08-01 . chapter 7Whoops, I guess I got so in to the story I forgot to stop and review every chapter. Sorry bout that.
Well these three chapters were really good. But did Norm HAVE to almost let Des die? And Timmy finally apologized, and Tootie still tackled him! And I knew Norm was going to fall for Des, I just knew it! I can’t wait to see how there relationship develops. That’s gonna be pretty interesting, especially since Norm doesn’t want a girl and Des sees him as a big jerk. Norm’s not that bad though, he’s sarcastic just like me! Well the story was really good, I enjoyed it a lot and I can’t wait to read the sequel!
Later! |
 crazydbzfan87 2005-07-27 . chapter 7 Hi! I was wondering...PLEASE WRITE THE NEXT STORY PLEASE!...please?
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 Eternal Silence 2005-07-18 . chapter 4Good chapter. And okay, it wasn’t me. Thanks for clearing that up. And that’s too bad that Vicky and Chip aren’t gonna be in this. I do love them both.
Well anyways, it’s a good thing Tootie now knows that Des is alive and that she can save her. Norm may still be somewhat of a jerk, but maybe he won’t be so reluctant to let Des stay with him. I’ve seen the pics you drew of her, she’s pretty. So I think he’ll probably fall for her. And now Veronica’s gonna be tutored by Tootie. That’s interesting. But man for some reason when I was reading that part when Veronica was talking to Tootie about Trixie, I found my self defending Trixie a little. I couldn’t believe it. Man ever since I wrote “Like Romeo and Juliet” (Trixie/Chester story) I guess I don’t think she’s that bad anymore. Man, I’m starting to like all the characters I once hated. (Like Paulina…). Dang, anyways, I really liked this chapter. The writing was as good as ever. Well I’m really liking the story, keep up the good work! |
 issues09 2005-07-17 . chapter 7this was really good i just love Norm! well its really good |