This is very good :) I really like it. Perfectly in character and good Original Character as well. You'd better finish it lol or you'll be sorry.

About time. So as usual this is very good. Now I'm just desperately waiting for your next chapter. okay? Please?

Ah!! What has happened to Butler? He's certainly acting strange... O_o
And Juliet has her fairy memories back! Yay!

Anyways, awesome chapter! It certainly got the action going.

Can't wait for the next ones!
Hey, 1 more review, and you'll reach your goal of 100 reviews! ^^

I just love the lines Foaly uses to needle Mulch. Quite witty, actually.

A goblin to see Holly Short? Wait aminute. Back up a second. An intelligent goblin?

I also like this line... "Foaly scowled. He had never thought a day would come when Mulch would think of something he hadn’t. Clearly the end of the world was fast approaching." Whaddaya know, he's got a point.

Hmm--if the mesmer doesn't work on Matt, perhaps that means she's got a bit of fairy blood in her?

And what's up with Butler? I suppose I'll have to wait for the next chapter to find out.

Finally, as you said, it's been a while, so my memory may be shaky on some of the details. I apologize if I'm asking any questions that have already been answered.

Excellent! Very in-character and quite well-written. I can't wait to read more.

I'm adding this to my favorite stories list.

WOW! That was fast! Thank you for the update (and for mentioning me in your AN, that's so COOL!)! I love your sense of humour (plus I love the sense of humour you gave Matt, she's awesome "the first time she'd been hit on by a woman."), because this story is really funny, but not overly so. Plus there are no 'stupid' jokes, all of yours are the kind that if worded correctly are hilarious (btw they ARE worded correctly)! I'm still excited about the ending and how everything will turn out, but I'm satisfying my curiousity by imagining my own ending (and failing miserably..). I don't want to sound ungrateful by asking you for another update right away, after you already posted one (and the day after my review too!), but I am still looking forward to the next chapter, whenever you post it! Thanks for sharing your great story! (I wonder if its impossible for me to write shorter reviews..)

OMG! This story is AMAZING! Seriously! I LOVE IT! Plus Matt is an interesting character and I like her. As strange as it seems I suspected she was a girl from the very begining (though it was mostly wishful thinking, see I don't think Artemis is the type to be gay seeing as he would have enough trouble starting a relationship with a girl, let alone a boy) it's probably because I recently rewatched the movie she's the man. Anyway I really hope you continue this story (since your last update was last year) because it is at a most hectic and interesting point (what with Artemis' parents thinking he's a murderer, Juliet getting her memories back, Matt finding out about the people, Matt being able to deflect the mesmer, and them being on the verge of solving this huge mystery of the Javegins (sp?)) and I am looking forward to see where you're going with all of this and how you're going to tie up all the strings (mainly the whole mesmer not working on Matt). Sorry for the ridiculously long and definately pointless review. Please keep writing!

I'll admit it, I had thought it. ANyway, I can't wait to find out why Matt isn't affected. How Artemis manages to deal with his angry parents. (They aren't going to pull the 'I'm dissapionted in you' line are they? That one kills.)

I eagerly await your next chapter.

I just stumbled upon your fic, and happened to read all seventeen chapters straight through! I've really enjoyed it xD (and was not expecting the twist, I applaud you greatly for that!) The whole thing was very entertaining and very well written. I luff it :D I suppose I should be reviewing this chapter though... Sorry about that -is getting majorly sidetracked-

“My God! It’s… an Oompa Loompa?”
That just cracked me up! It was absolutely hilarious!

O Matt is resisted to the mesmer. That's interesting. Hmm... *wonders who's behind all this* xD Ah, well. UPDATE SOON!

Great update!! Can't wait to read more!!

^-^ Lovely as always. Thank you for it! For beta-ing, I'm willing to help, though I do specialise in how things sound (flow of the words) and basic (gradeschool) grammar

I'd just like to alert you - this has been nominated for the 2006 Orion Awards for AF fanfiction in the Best WIP chaptered (or Best Completed Chaptered, depending...) and Best OC.

I encourage you, both as a nominated author and as a reader/writer of AF fanfiction, to help nominate other good authors and fics for the various categories, and to later take part in the People's Choice voting. There is a link to both the forums - which are lovely, BTW - and to the general site on my bio. I think you'll have a lot of fun there. :)

Good work, and good luck!

Oh, that's just great! They think he's a murdurer?! He's just not having the best of days, is he? And I admit to being curious about Matt's immunity to mesmers.

YEAH!! This story is one of my favs.! thanks so much for updating!! I had ALMOST given up hope "sighs dramatically" lol. thanks! love it!
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?? ohh...what's gona happen? lol. excellent job...really coming along...ME LIKE! Thanks!
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