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| squishy fluff 2005-05-19 ch 1, | abusebeautiful again. very simple use of words yet very expressive. :D sad but realistic. loved it. |
| audi katia 2005-05-18 ch 1, | abuseI know this was all angsty and whatnot, but I found it somewhat amusing. I dunno, I guess I just perceived a different tone/mood from it. It's still amzingly well written. Good job! A rose for you... @-->>-- |
| Nanio-713 2005-05-16 ch 1, | abuseYou know, whenever I read your stories They're either pretty depressing or sweet in a "oh, really?" kinda way. Just one of those that gives you a brief smile and raises your spirit one fifth of an inch higher (if that). This story is no exception. I love it. Keep up the good work. |
| Taffy Cat 2005-05-15 ch 1, | abuseYay for ficlets! This is REALLY good! Nice extended metaphor, and stuff. [Quote]It’s not just me, the others too.[/Quote] That really adds a good touch. It really does. *Nods* ~T.Cat |