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infinitemoonlight
2009-09-24 . chapter 1
Ahahaha!
OMG!
That is so funny! XD
I love it! XD
lilkyonkyon
2009-08-13 . chapter 1
I really have only one word to describe this story:

ADORABLE.
Aosugiru Sora
2009-08-05 . chapter 1
Haha. Akward moment! And Riza's so evil. xD
The2nd
2009-08-03 . chapter 1
Good story, very amusing.
RyokiIshidaChan
2009-06-09 . chapter 1
Ohmywow. This is made of GREATNESS.
I couldn't even find any grammar mistakes!
-nod of approval-
iryna
2009-04-16 . chapter 1
LOL, that was so awesome 8D
07Janina07
2009-04-13 . chapter 1
:lmao That so funny, thank you for writing it. Good Job!
openwindow
2009-04-11 . chapter 1
ahahahahahahahha! respect to you! lol i
Hawkeye-mustang
2009-03-22 . chapter 1
This story is great! That is just one of those times when you often laugh back on. But, it's still really juicy and funny. Typical humor. very good!
Ilyichlenin
2009-01-13 . chapter 1
Loved it!

I could totally seeing something like this happening and you wrote their characters very well. I was laughing since the beginning of the fic, when Ed saw Mustang in wearing boxers *yummy*
Rosa Lui
2008-09-28 . chapter 1
*loves*

You know, I could TOTALLY see this happening...
AcidAngelTears
2008-08-02 . chapter 1
LOL, love it! (Hey, I'll trade places with Ed any day XD)
Phamtom of the Pie
2008-04-06 . chapter 1
Ohmigosh! I luvs it! i can totally imagine it actually being in the manga or anime... goodjob!
shinnehmachobaklito
2008-01-04 . chapter 1
funny man!! :] i could imagine Ed drops his jaw as he laid eyes on the two.. lolz.. writewrite and take care

-shin-
SEED Genesis
2007-10-08 . chapter 1
Very good beggining!!
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