Your story is totally awsome, i cant wait till you update, please update soon i cant wait to read the rest. :)

Is it too much to hope that you will finish this story? It was going along so very well. Please consider finishing it, as I absolutely HATE unfinished business. Thank you.

Not many Labyrinth stories have the Threesome. Well done on including them.
I like the inclusion of the minor characters, viz, the gnomes, fairies, the gryphon, the dragon etc. It makes the story alive and more interesting, and not just another boring "Jareth-meets-Sarah-falls-in-love-and-tries-to-win-her-love" plot.
Except for obvious grammatical mistakes (made it haed to follow story and I had to guess your meaning), this seems a fairly interesting plot. I hope you return to the story soon.

I absolutly love your story. I mean a lot I usualy don't write reviews but that is how much I loved your. I love that you incorporated Monty Python and the Holy Grail into it. That's the reason I love the story so much. Hope you finnish the rest soon because I'm dyin to find out what happens.
Inuyashaluvskag

I've read all of your stories on this site, and I must say, I'm impressed. They have an originality that I have rarely seen in fanfiction. Despite the fact that your tales are unfinished and you need an editor rather badly, I detect in your writing something of the "magic touch" of storytelling - a rare gift, even among published authors. You have great potential. Keep writing! (And contact me if you want a beta.)
-Juliana Olstad
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Hi I'm new at reviewing and all but I just want to tell you I love your story so far.

*cries* You haven't continued it! This wonderful tale that just stoped. *sighs* Please, please, please think about finishing it?

~Duchess

*stamps foot* finish things *petulantly*

Okay! More than 3 years is a bit extreme to have WritersBlock, isn't it?

Sneaky isn't she? And not in a good way. Order at times more terrible than chaos, for in chaos lies progress, order only the wearing same.
Good writing.

this is truely the best labyrinth fanfic here. not overly romantic, but sweet at the same time. the plot thickens and is ingenous. wonderful wonderful.

You are going to cont. the fic right?
Please don't let that monster rape Sarah!!
Um, you are using witch and wich wrong, actualy your not using wich at all and you should. Witch is the female wizard, and wich is the other kind.

You are going to cont. the fic right?
Please don't let that monster rape Sarah!!
Um, you are using witch and wich wrong, actualy your not using wich at all and you should. Witch is the female wizard, and wich is the other kind.

You are going to cont. the fic right?
Please don't let that monster rape Sarah!!
Um, you are using witch and wich wrong, actualy your not using wich at all and you should. Witch is the female wizard, and wich is the other kind.

You are going to cont. the fic right?
Please don't let that monster rape Sarah!!
Um, you are using witch and wich wrong, actualy your not using wich at all and you should. Witch is the female wizard, and wich is the other kind.