Seph's a bit OOC (definitely too talkative), but I still find the fic very interesting. Please, overcome your writer's block soon (ah, if it only were so easy... *sigh*) and continue! :)

*hugs* i feel your pain with the whole end of chapter block thing. i'm there myself at the moment.

nice fic tho! very intreiguing. i'm waiting for the next chapter.

Why, this is actually pretty good! *eyes sparkle* I thought it was a bit implausible at first (just the two of them fighting all these monsters), but in the end, everything made perfect sense. Including Zack's soon-to-be promotion. :)
Many things for writing the fic; I only wish it were longer! :P